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Post by Green Tee on Fri Apr 23, 2010 9:24 pm

Dormin speeds across the race track at terrifying speeds! This monster of an airspeeder reaches awesome speeds, you can barely see it! The best on the market with a high Explosion-Test safety rating! All for 650,000 Credits! Hurry, before you're in last place!
Obi-Wan Kenobi wrote: Blast! This is why I hate flying.
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Re: Liun Dormin's Kaddimax Ari

Post by Guest on Fri Apr 23, 2010 9:51 pm

Not bad. The white looks kind of weird though. I think that is because of the background. Have a black background and it will look better.
The guy looks nice. The speeder is okay, but would be better if it was all white.

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Post by Green Tee on Fri Apr 23, 2010 10:26 pm

Yea, I know, but I didn't have the pieces to build a fin out of white. Sad
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Post by eclipsegrafx on Fri Apr 23, 2010 11:20 pm

Looks pretty cool... I would use the clear windshield if you have and then see what white pieces can make the spoiler or have none in the back....
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Post by Persian Prince on Fri Apr 23, 2010 11:38 pm

Looks good. You made a referance to dewbacks, is this on Tatooine? If so, why is it white and not tan?
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Post by Alpha Beta on Fri Apr 23, 2010 11:39 pm

I don't know if the fig you used is your sigfig, but you should change the black cape, to one that matches the speeder color, or fig, like light grey or white. Wink
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Post by Guest on Fri Apr 23, 2010 11:57 pm

Persian Prince wrote:Looks good. You made a referance to dewbacks, is this on Tatooine? If so, why is it white and not tan?

True. If it is on Tatooine, then it should be tan. Otherwise it would stand out like a sore thumb. Not with stealth.

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Post by Green Tee on Sat Apr 24, 2010 12:04 am

No, it's not on Tantooine, but what did you want me to say? 4000 Taun-taunpower!?
Eclipse, that's a very good idea. Now to find that windshield....
The cape is a no-go. I have a brown and black, so nothing doing. Black looked the best, and no cape is no villain.
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Post by Alpha Beta on Sat Apr 24, 2010 12:08 am

Green Tee wrote:No, it's not on Tantooine, but what did you want me to say? 4000 Taun-taunpower!?
Eclipse, that's a very good idea. Now to find that windshield....
The cape is a no-go. I have a brown and black, so nothing doing. Black looked the best, and no cape is no villain.

A very good point. (you can always buy a cape. Wink )
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Post by Green Tee on Sat Apr 24, 2010 12:11 am

My parents are extra picky about that. One, only my mom has paypal, and 2, if I spend 10 bucks on shipping on a 20 cent item that doesn't come, can I sue? No, I don't even know the person. Can I do anything else? No.
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Post by Alpha Beta on Sat Apr 24, 2010 12:18 am

Green Tee wrote:My parents are extra picky about that. One, only my mom has paypal, and 2, if I spend 10 bucks on shipping on a 20 cent item that doesn't come, can I sue? No, I don't even know the person. Can I do anything else? No.

Another good point, you got me this time. (Although there are always trades/sales within the CABG, and I'm sure they don't charge high shipping.) Wink (and no, I'm not advertising myself or anyone else in the guild's products!)
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Post by bl*c on Sat Apr 24, 2010 12:19 am

It looks good up until it reaches the windshield. Wink
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Post by Green Tee on Sat Apr 24, 2010 1:51 am

Ok bl*c. Other than the engines and windshield, could you suggest something? I'm going to try and build the engines, and find that clear windshield.
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Post by Troopa Daisy on Sat Apr 24, 2010 2:00 am

Not bad. But maybe a brick built engine would make it look better. Wink Smile
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Post by Danester Man on Sat Apr 24, 2010 2:05 am

The figs helmet does not match. I wonder what Rook would say.(Nudges Rook in the side.)
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Post by Green Tee on Sun Apr 25, 2010 7:45 pm

Updated post with new picture. I updated the speeder itself, of course (and the figure).
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Post by Alpha Beta on Sun Apr 25, 2010 11:06 pm

Much better, the new one is a big improvement. Smile
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Post by Rook on Mon Apr 26, 2010 3:21 pm

Nice looks like a dragster. Thumbs up

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Re: Liun Dormin's Kaddimax Ari

Post by Persian Prince on Mon Apr 26, 2010 3:29 pm

Looks much better. That is why you never go with the first thing you build! Wink
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Re: Liun Dormin's Kaddimax Ari

Post by eclipsegrafx on Mon Apr 26, 2010 4:07 pm

Green tee this looks sooooo much better!

Really like this. I would suggest you play with it some more and you will see it take a life of its own and get even better.
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Re: Liun Dormin's Kaddimax Ari

Post by The Jinja Ninja on Mon Apr 26, 2010 4:45 pm

In this thread:

- Made-up words
- Bonktron
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Re: Liun Dormin's Kaddimax Ari

Post by Green Tee on Mon Apr 26, 2010 9:40 pm

@Jinja: Sorry to disappoint, lots of people use plenty of made up words, including, I think, bonktron.
@Rook: Thanks, that's what I was aiming for.
@All: Thanks for the comments! I probably will update again.
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Post by Guest on Mon Apr 26, 2010 11:55 pm

I see that you updated it since I last spoke. Looks a lot better this way.

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Re: Liun Dormin's Kaddimax Ari

Post by Green Tee on Thu Apr 29, 2010 12:38 am

Updated engines for last time. Thanks and enjoy!
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Post by Alpha Beta on Fri Apr 30, 2010 12:17 am

^Another nice improvement, good job. Smile
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