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Post by bl*c on Sun May 09, 2010 6:57 pm

I was bored so I made this random little vignette(?). Anyways, Commander Fox and his security troops are on Raxus Prime for no apparent reason on a search and rescue patrol after a battle; when they came across a trail of blood and some human bones. They stare and wonder
"Who did this?"

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Re: Who did this?

Post by CowsRTasty on Sun May 09, 2010 6:59 pm

THE BUTLER DID IT!

No, not really. Nice job!

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Re: Who did this?

Post by Tac on Sun May 09, 2010 7:06 pm

He obviously asked for some free BAPs. Razz
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Re: Who did this?

Post by Commander Jackal on Sun May 09, 2010 9:04 pm

This moc is beutifuly wonderful but WHO DID IT? Hola Wow!
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Re: Who did this?

Post by koalaexpert on Sun May 09, 2010 9:14 pm

Very good MOC, I like how you used Fox as he isn't in many MOCs outside of the Coruscant. I love how the bloods dripping dowan and how only part of the remains are there unlike most people who just put a skelie and maybe a little blood, but this show that something evil and porbably hugry is lurking on Raxus Prime. Poor
guy Sad




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Re: Who did this?

Post by Ham701 on Mon May 10, 2010 1:00 am

Colonel Mustard. In the Hall. With.......A HERRING!

It's a great honor to receive the Dane Cook Comedian of the Year award, I know.
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Re: Who did this?

Post by Troopa Daisy on Mon May 10, 2010 1:05 am

This is quite a simple yet good MOC. Although I would say it looks more like on Mygeeto than Raxus Prime. Raxus Prime would be way more junkyardish. Wink Smile
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Re: Who did this?

Post by bl*c on Mon May 10, 2010 2:29 am

^I just called it Raxus Prime because of the "dirt" colored plates.

Thanks for the comments everyone! Smile
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Re: Who did this?

Post by Rook on Mon May 10, 2010 3:18 pm

Work on your details! This is not good for Guild Level member. We expect more from you. Don't get me wrong at first glance I loved it. But there are just a lot of issues that you should avoid.

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1. Unfinished debris.
2. Angled piece off of space thus creating over hang. Therefore looks sloppy.
3. Minifigures feet are actually lower then the ground surface level.
4. Random grate piece used at the bottom of MOC then covered suggests lack of planning/design.
5. Skull seems to be floating.

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Re: Who did this?

Post by droidbait on Mon May 10, 2010 4:31 pm

Now that Rook has pointed these things out, it doesn't look as good as it did before he pointed them out. That said, it is still quite a good MOC.
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Re: Who did this?

Post by Delta 1608 on Mon May 10, 2010 7:06 pm

Was it professor plum, in the billiard room, with the pistol?
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Re: Who did this?

Post by Guest on Mon May 10, 2010 7:22 pm

Ok, I admit I did it! Razz Just kidding. It looks good, other then what Rook pointed out.

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Re: Who did this?

Post by bl*c on Mon May 10, 2010 10:45 pm

Jeese, it was a tablescrap guys. Razz
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Re: Who did this?

Post by Halen on Mon May 10, 2010 10:55 pm

bl*c wrote:Jeese, it was a tablescrap guys. Razz

You didn't declare it as a tablescrap in the original post and if so why post it at all? Not everything you will build is worth a post.
Declaring something as a "tablescrap" after the fact because someone leaves some constructive criticism is a lame cover and sounds like an excuse.
Quality over quantity.

/end rant
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Re: Who did this?

Post by bl*c on Mon May 10, 2010 10:59 pm

bl*c's original post wrote:I was bored so I made this random little vignette(?).
I thought that would cover it, sorry. I know I've learned my lesson. Embarassed

Thanks for helping me out though Halen & Rook.
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Re: Who did this?

Post by Alpha Beta on Tue May 11, 2010 12:42 am

Wow, tough crowd to please. Shocked Razz
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Re: Who did this?

Post by Gerrard on Tue May 11, 2010 2:50 am

Still, this isn't too bad, Rook shows good points, but now take his points, and post an update. Smile
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Re: Who did this?

Post by Rook on Tue May 11, 2010 2:56 pm

Alpha Beta wrote:Wow, tough crowd to please. Shocked Razz

This is the "Builders Guild". Wink We make better builders using fire and ice. Razz

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Re: Who did this?

Post by Noble-1337 on Tue May 11, 2010 6:05 pm

Ahhh! Enigmabadger what have those banned BA forum members done to you?
Nah! Just kidding It was good, untill Rook pointed out the faults, needs just a little more work.
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Re: Who did this?

Post by Alpha Beta on Tue May 11, 2010 11:47 pm

B.Y.O.B wrote:Ahhh! Enigmabadger what have those banned BA forum members done to you?
Nah! Just kidding It was good, untill Rook pointed out the faults, needs just a little more work.

Wait, Bl*c is Enigmabadger! Hola Wow!

@Rook: I know that expectations are high, sorry if I seemed naive. Embarassed
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Re: Who did this?

Post by bl*c on Wed May 12, 2010 1:25 am

Alpha Beta wrote:
B.Y.O.B wrote:Ahhh! Enigmabadger what have those banned BA forum members done to you?
Nah! Just kidding It was good, untill Rook pointed out the faults, needs just a little more work.

Wait, Bl*c is Enigmabadger! Hola Wow!

Who?

Nice one word post. -R Shocked
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Re: Who did this?

Post by Ruitath on Wed May 12, 2010 5:46 am

Yes the little vig looks pretty good, until Rook pointed out a few things, but it still looks nice. I burst out into laughter when I saw it though, so nice job.
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Re: Who did this?

Post by Alpha Beta on Wed May 12, 2010 11:43 pm

bl*c wrote:
Alpha Beta wrote:
B.Y.O.B wrote:Ahhh! Enigmabadger what have those banned BA forum members done to you?
Nah! Just kidding It was good, untill Rook pointed out the faults, needs just a little more work.

Wait, Bl*c is Enigmabadger! Hola Wow!

Who?

Nice one word post. -R Shocked

Well who was B.Y.O.B. talking about. :scratch:
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Re: Who did this?

Post by bl*c on Wed May 12, 2010 11:57 pm

First, this is :spammers:

And second, he apparently confused me with someone by the name Enigmabadger, who I am not or know of for that matter.
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Re: Who did this?

Post by CowsRTasty on Thu May 13, 2010 8:07 pm

Rook wrote:Work on your details! This is not good for Guild Level member. We expect more from you. Don't get me wrong at first glance I loved it. But there are just a lot of issues that you should avoid.

Rook, he said he did this when he was bored. Cut him some slack...

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