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Post by 1 Million Watts of Power on Thu May 20, 2010 2:49 am

If only I got into the guild soon enough...



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Post by Rook on Thu May 20, 2010 3:00 pm

Looks good at first.

I'd airbrush out dirt spots on your backdrop when you're entering contests. (Yes I know this isnít a contest MOC. Just helpful advice.)



Engine piece is nice but I would have moved it forward and put in a windshield.

Light grey strip seems out of place because it's only light grey spot.

Hiding the red parts on the decal pieces works but look at the MOC with the red spots showing. See which is better.

Finally the curved part underneath draws interest to the bottom of this MOC. But then you didn't show use the belly of the speeder. So leave us wondering if it was planned or simply a lack of pieces. Wink

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Post by Guest on Thu May 20, 2010 5:41 pm

Yeah, the engine should be moved forward, it looks weird where it is at right now.

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Post by Rook on Thu May 20, 2010 6:08 pm

Yeah you put in a windshield and moving the engine vent forward and dropping it down 1-2 plate heights will really make this speeder look faster.

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Re: If only...

Post by 1 Million Watts of Power on Fri May 21, 2010 3:16 am

Sorry I haven't replied to any of these comments yet, my internet hasn't been working today because the IP address is messed up or somthing.


@Rook: Yeah, at first I wasn't gonna put the bottum pieces there, but I figured it looked better.




EDIT: That's not dirt... One time, I had my backdrop out, and I was eating some pizza...
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Post by Guest on Fri May 21, 2010 5:54 pm

1 Million Watts Of Power wrote:EDIT: That's not dirt... One time, I had my backdrop out, and I was eating some pizza...

Wow, maybe you should get a new backdrop then.....

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Post by Alpha Beta on Fri May 21, 2010 11:26 pm

The_Customizer wrote:
1 Million Watts Of Power wrote:EDIT: That's not dirt... One time, I had my backdrop out, and I was eating some pizza...

Wow, maybe you should get a new backdrop then.....

I just use a plain color bed-sheet.
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Post by 1 Million Watts of Power on Fri May 21, 2010 11:27 pm

Well, I could edit out the spot in GIMP, but I'm too lazy. Razz
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Post by Troopa Daisy on Sat May 22, 2010 4:15 pm

The shape of the speeder isn`t bad, but I don`t like the engine piece in the middle of the MOC. Maybe in the back would look better. Wink Smile
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Post by Steg on Sat May 22, 2010 4:24 pm

I like the shape of it, but there should definitly be a windshield like Rook said. Also, I think the pilot is a little too raised out of the speeder.


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Post by bl*c on Sat May 22, 2010 4:27 pm

I agree with him and Rook.

Still pretty good though. Smile
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Re: If only...

Post by Steg on Sat May 22, 2010 8:19 pm

bl*c wrote:I agree with him and Rook.

Still pretty good though. Smile
Oh, so I'm just "him".......that bites the soul. Sad Razz
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Post by bl*c on Sun May 23, 2010 4:29 am

I'll kick your soul next time. Razz
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