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We Are All Just Prisoners Here Of Our Own Device

Post by Zepher on Sat May 22, 2010 7:22 pm

Editors Note: In Page 14, Katherine is spelled with an "a" instead of an "e". Please ignore this error.

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Post by Guest on Sat May 22, 2010 7:47 pm

Wow, talk about suspenseful. Great job, can't wait for more!

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Post by Steg on Sat May 22, 2010 8:15 pm

This is really intense! But you also spelled severe wrong, there's an "e" at the end. Wink
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Post by Zepher on Sat May 22, 2010 8:18 pm

Ah, true. They are not severing their brain freeze, they have a bad case of it. Fair catch.
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Post by Jedi Joe on Sat May 22, 2010 8:22 pm

Great work! I hope later, that we're introduced to his home planet, maybe in at least a vision. I can't wait to see how this story folds out. Smile
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Post by Guest on Sat May 22, 2010 8:28 pm

One thing I forgot to put in my earlier post. The ending scene is confusing, maybe it should be a bit clearer.

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Post by Zepher on Sat May 22, 2010 9:00 pm

The_Customizer wrote:One thing I forgot to put in my earlier post. The ending scene is confusing, maybe it should be a bit clearer.

Please say what you are confused about. If you state things that vaguely I will be unable to help you.
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Post by Tac on Sat May 22, 2010 9:10 pm

The_Customizer wrote:One thing I forgot to put in my earlier post. The ending scene is confusing, maybe it should be a bit clearer.

Your post could be a lot clearer too.
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Post by Guest on Sat May 22, 2010 9:42 pm

Zepher wrote:
The_Customizer wrote:One thing I forgot to put in my earlier post. The ending scene is confusing, maybe it should be a bit clearer.

Please say what you are confused about. If you state things that vaguely I will be unable to help you.

Sorry for making the post confusing. In the very last scene, It wasn't very clear as to what was happening. That part was a little hard to understand. It seemed like one thing, then it seemed like you were saying a completely different thing. It is kind of confusing.

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Post by bl*c on Sat May 22, 2010 10:00 pm

^Have no idea what you're trying to say...

Cool comic, it's very mysterious and addictive. Smile
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Post by Caboose on Sun May 23, 2010 2:57 am

Nice. I really like Zepher comics and this is no different. For some reason I think the alien really is Jesus and he has come back.
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Post by Troopa Daisy on Sun May 23, 2010 3:25 am

This is a nice comic Zeph, what a great storyteller! Smile

I don't really get the last frame though, the one with just the white words on the grey-black background. What is that about? Wink
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Post by Zepher on Sun May 23, 2010 3:31 am

Troopa Daisy wrote:This is a nice comic Zeph, what a great storyteller! Smile

I don't really get the last frame though, the one with just the white words on the grey-black background. What is that about? Wink

I make the titles off lines from things. Quotes from famous people, songs, books. I just give the quote as a "back page" to give what I stole from credit, and all quotes are clues or important the plot.
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Post by Troopa Daisy on Sun May 23, 2010 3:38 am

Ah, I see now Zeph. Thanks for telling, that clears a lot of confusion. Smile
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Post by Zepher on Sun May 23, 2010 3:54 am

You've never heard Hotel California before?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZAYe366im1s
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Post by BBprod on Sun May 23, 2010 4:07 am

Good song. I have heard it many times. Also great comic.
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Post by Caboose on Sun May 23, 2010 4:13 pm

Yes good song also, like the reference.
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Post by The Lone Survivor on Sun May 23, 2010 8:05 pm

Very suspenseful. It's also very realistic. It's hard to say anything bad because it is so well put. Ah well, it is Zepher we're talking about here.
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Post by Alpha Beta on Sun May 23, 2010 8:56 pm

Great comic Zeph, it is suspensful, and you foreshadowed a little bit, about 'Green'. If I had to predict what was going to happen, he is some kind of CIA agent making sure that everthing is in order.
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Post by Master Potato on Sun May 23, 2010 8:58 pm

I love it Zeph! Loads of suspense! I can't wait for the next issue!

Also...You ever seen I, Robot? The thing the alien said at the end really reminded me of it.
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Post by Tac on Sun May 23, 2010 8:59 pm

I less than three this. <3

Definitely my favourite comic series of yours. Smile
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Post by Zepher on Sun May 23, 2010 10:20 pm

Thanks Tac, that means a lot considering how well you know Apoc!

And thanks for all the comments everyone!
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Post by Tac on Sun May 23, 2010 10:22 pm

I love the fact it nudges thoughts into your mind, not completely manipulate it. Wink
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Post by Zepher on Sun May 23, 2010 10:35 pm

These sort of things are important in later issues! This a mystery to be explored, especially as we get into later chapters. I've given mysself quite a story-telling challange, there's a lot to tell and it will be done in a unorthodox fashion, but I think if it works it will be very cool.
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Post by Jedi Joe on Sun May 23, 2010 10:37 pm

Are we going to see more aliens, or even a glimpse of the planet it came from?
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