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Imperial wave 2! (Hoth)

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Imperial wave 2! (Hoth)

Post by LazerBlade on Wed Jun 02, 2010 5:06 pm

A late contest entry. Razz















As always, Enjoy and please comment. Wink
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Re: Imperial wave 2! (Hoth)

Post by Ruitath on Wed Jun 02, 2010 6:44 pm

Very cool looking! I like the different slopes and levels you created. Although, I really don't like the round cylinder pieces for the rebel's barricade. Otherwise, great work! Wink
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Re: Imperial wave 2! (Hoth)

Post by Guest on Wed Jun 02, 2010 6:46 pm

It looks good. Why is there tan and brown beneath the snow?

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Re: Imperial wave 2! (Hoth)

Post by LazerBlade on Wed Jun 02, 2010 7:07 pm

The_Customizer wrote:It looks good. Why is there tan and brown beneath the snow?

If you dig with a shovel, you will find mud & dirt. Razz Surprised
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Re: Imperial wave 2! (Hoth)

Post by droidbait on Wed Jun 02, 2010 7:10 pm

LazerBlade wrote:
The_Customizer wrote:It looks good. Why is there tan and brown beneath the snow?

If you dig with a shovel, you will find mud & dirt. Razz Surprised

You don't normally find mud and dirt on an ice planet now do you? Anyway it's alright but I don't really like the barricade whereas I do like the Imps cannon.
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Re: Imperial wave 2! (Hoth)

Post by Jedi Joe on Wed Jun 02, 2010 7:39 pm

Actually, I think he has it right. There would be dirt and rock on an ice planet like Hoth.

I really like this, very much! Would have gotten my vote had it not been late. Thumbs up
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Re: Imperial wave 2! (Hoth)

Post by Steg on Wed Jun 02, 2010 8:23 pm

I personaly love the cylinder barricade. Although I think it's silly there's a turret about 5 feet away from the barricade.
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Re: Imperial wave 2! (Hoth)

Post by Zepher on Wed Jun 02, 2010 8:31 pm

Very impressive, much nicer than anything else you've popped out recently. The slopes are nice, and the rebels little base is well done with the ladder. I'm a little unsure about the cylinder barricade, it just looks a little half-assed to me, I think you could have done better, but it certainly doesn't take away from the over-all appearance!
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Re: Imperial wave 2! (Hoth)

Post by Alpha Beta on Wed Jun 02, 2010 11:14 pm

Tactical-Knife!! Razz Seems out of place, but cool in its own way, the moc is good, but the cylinder barricade seems awkward.
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Re: Imperial wave 2! (Hoth)

Post by Darman on Wed Jun 02, 2010 11:16 pm

I'm loving the snot technique on the hills and the barriers curvature makes the moc look much more complete.
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Re: Imperial wave 2! (Hoth)

Post by LazerBlade on Wed Jun 02, 2010 11:22 pm

I have a picture of bunker hill with the cylinder barricades. Is makes a great wall.

If I extend the sides of the MOC (that I will never do), I would have another cylinder barricade "wall" on the other side of the cannon. And a trench around it. But then it might look better behind the cylinder barricades in front of the cannon.

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Re: Imperial wave 2! (Hoth)

Post by ^Ninja Trooper^ on Thu Jun 03, 2010 12:36 am

Ahh. Much better than most of the things you've come up with lately. I like the rebel barricade and the flow of the moc, and also the portable turret. Thumbs up
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Re: Imperial wave 2! (Hoth)

Post by Troopa Daisy on Thu Jun 03, 2010 12:46 am

Everything is good here, except the rebel barricade. It makes it look too much like a castle. Either make it out of slopes, or don't use the round pieces. Wink Smile
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Re: Imperial wave 2! (Hoth)

Post by Knight on Thu Jun 03, 2010 12:52 am

Troopa Daisy wrote:Everything is good here, except the rebel barricade. It makes it look too much like a castle. Either make it out of slopes, or don't use the round pieces. Wink Smile

Agreed. Here's my input, note these are very minor things. The round dish on top of the 2x2x3 slope is hanging over a bit which looks like some snow is floating. The other minor problem is the grill tile by the turret, it looks out of place. Other than that, I must say this is a very nice entry. I do like the slopes on the incline. Thumbs up
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Re: Imperial wave 2! (Hoth)

Post by LazerBlade on Thu Jun 03, 2010 4:50 pm

Knight wrote:
Troopa Daisy wrote:Everything is good here, except the rebel barricade. It makes it look too much like a castle. Either make it out of slopes, or don't use the round pieces. Wink Smile

Agreed. Here's my input, note these are very minor things. The round dish on top of the 2x2x3 slope is hanging over a bit which looks like some snow is floating. The other minor problem is the grill tile by the turret, it looks out of place. Other than that, I must say this is a very nice entry. I do like the slopes on the incline. Thumbs up

What is wrong with the barricade. Have you ever seen a snow fort/wall before? Razz

I am now off to make changes.

C&C welcome!
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