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Vindi's Laboratory

Post by bl*c on Sat Jun 12, 2010 11:40 pm

Here's a vignette(?) I made today to practice my greebling. I do say that I'm improving. It's a hallway from Vindi's Laboratory from what I remember as seen in Blue Shadow Virus. Well here it is, I hope you enjoy it.

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Left side:


Right side:


Middle:


Vindi's point of view:


Top:


Super battle droid's point of view:


Figs:

I don't have a Commander Cody yet, so I used my soon to be Legion Commander.

Thanks! Smile


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Re: Vindi's Laboratory

Post by Darman on Sat Jun 12, 2010 11:46 pm

The moc is looking quite nice, my only issue with it is that it could use some more rubble and debris near the hole.
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Re: Vindi's Laboratory

Post by bl*c on Sat Jun 12, 2010 11:48 pm

Yeah, I noticed that after I posted it. I'll try to do that next time I build something similar to this.
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Re: Vindi's Laboratory

Post by Rabid Squirrel on Sun Jun 13, 2010 3:18 am

Reminds me of Eclipse's "Red Alert"...

I quite like the greebles at the top, but the plain walls underneath are contrasting in a bad way. It also doesn't seem to secure between the walls and the greebled top piece.
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Re: Vindi's Laboratory

Post by bl*c on Sun Jun 13, 2010 3:24 am

Very true, walls and greebles are my weak point. I need to fix that eventually with practice.
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Re: Vindi's Laboratory

Post by Troopa Daisy on Sun Jun 13, 2010 3:34 am

Yes, instead of those plain walls a greebled one would look better. Also, more explosion and gunshot effects should be shown.

I also don't really like the choice of Vindi's helmet, it doesn't look right. (Keeps on making me think Vindi's an ODST) Wink Smile
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Re: Vindi's Laboratory

Post by Rabid Squirrel on Sun Jun 13, 2010 3:37 am

Yes here is what I have for you to specify.

1. Lack of greebles/bad transition.
2. I like the random destruction.
3. ODST?
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Re: Vindi's Laboratory

Post by droidbait on Sun Jun 13, 2010 12:00 pm

You do know that Cody was not in that episode right? It was Rex leading the clones and bomb squad troops.
Anyway I agree with the others about the greebles but overall, nice job.
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Re: Vindi's Laboratory

Post by Axel on Sun Jun 13, 2010 2:16 pm

You can't just greeble randomly; there's a time and place for random greebling, and a time and place for neater greebling. In this case, it's a labroratory, so neater, cleaner greebles should have been used, arranged in a repeating pattern of some kind.

Still, interesting MOC, just keep what I said about the greebling in mind.
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Re: Vindi's Laboratory

Post by bl*c on Sun Jun 13, 2010 3:26 pm

^I'll keep that in mind. Wink

Thanks for the comments everyone! Smile
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Re: Vindi's Laboratory

Post by eclipsegrafx on Sun Jun 13, 2010 3:29 pm

Axel wrote:You can't just greeble randomly; there's a time and place for random greebling, and a time and place for neater greebling. In this case, it's a labroratory, so neater, cleaner greebles should have been used, arranged in a repeating pattern of some kind.

Still, interesting MOC, just keep what I said about the greebling in mind.

I have to say thanks for this tidbit! I am still learning about greebliage and didn't know there was a time and place for greeble styles. I personally try to pattern them when (if) I use them.
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Re: Vindi's Laboratory

Post by Alpha Beta on Sun Jun 13, 2010 3:46 pm

Not bad, but like the others said, it could use more debris.
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