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Phase II entry WIP.

Post by LazerBlade on Thu Jun 17, 2010 11:53 pm

Most of you all might recognize this creation from one I built a few days ago.

This is what I have done so far:


I am going to add a second story and maybe a 3rd. So please leave some suggestion for me. Some one did mention a droid melting pit. Razz I am just not sure what is should look like and where I should put it. So picture would be a big help.

Thanks. Smile

It's "Phase", not "Phrase". Title edited. -Tac
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Re: Phase II entry WIP.

Post by Rabid Squirrel on Fri Jun 18, 2010 12:01 am

Nice Phrase 2 entry. It's pretty good.
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Re: Phase II entry WIP.

Post by LazerBlade on Fri Jun 18, 2010 12:15 am

Rabid Squirrel wrote:Nice Phrase 2 entry. It's pretty good.

What could it use? I know it could use something. I am just not sure. Shocked
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Re: Phase II entry WIP.

Post by Hazard with a Glove on Fri Jun 18, 2010 12:18 am

LazerBlade wrote:
Rabid Squirrel wrote:Nice Phrase 2 entry. It's pretty good.

What could it use? I know it could use something. I am just not sure. Shocked
Needs more cow bell.

And Rabid's post was a little sarcastic, do you see the bold?
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Re: Phase II entry WIP.

Post by Rabid Squirrel on Fri Jun 18, 2010 12:22 am

What it needs is to be taller. Then it will look much better. It looks cramped and strange. Extend the wall up in the pattern you started or get rid of the inverted slopes until the top.
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Re: Phase II entry WIP.

Post by Hazard with a Glove on Fri Jun 18, 2010 12:29 am

Honestly, it needs more....something. It's just way to simple and it is almost the same thing as waiting to be scrap metal. Which I think might makes people think you were to lazy to come up with something new.
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Re: Phase II entry WIP.

Post by Halen on Fri Jun 18, 2010 12:31 am

Needs some action! Just an illusion of movement somewhere cause right now its four guys standing in a hall.
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Re: Phase II entry WIP.

Post by Justin Pyne on Fri Jun 18, 2010 12:33 am

It's good for now. It still needs some point of action, like the above posts said. And just wondering, but why is the Jedi's lightsaber ignited when he's only talking to a Clone Officer? Wink
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Re: Phase II entry WIP.

Post by Alpha Beta on Fri Jun 18, 2010 1:19 am

Sergeant Macaroni wrote:It's good for now. It still needs some point of action, like the above posts said. And just wondering, but why is the Jedi's lightsaber ignited when he's only talking to a Clone Officer? Wink

I have to agree. Also, the moc is too plain, it needs a wow factor. Maybe a bad@ss custom clone, or something that just says wow. ( Hola Wow! )
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Re: Phase II entry WIP.

Post by Troopa Daisy on Fri Jun 18, 2010 1:43 am

I would start from something totally new. This makes it as if you were kind of lazy. Wink
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Re: Phase II entry WIP.

Post by LazerBlade on Fri Jun 18, 2010 1:54 am

O.K. O.K.! This is a WIP MOC. The minfigures will be in the MOC but will not be standing in the hall. And the purple light saber is there just to give the MOC some color.
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Re: Phase II entry WIP.

Post by bl*c on Fri Jun 18, 2010 3:41 pm

What part of the title don't you get! Phrase II<--This is sooo not a spelling error in your topic's title. Roll Eyes



Well, all I see is Awaiting To Be Scrap Metal with a new Jedi figure. Wink

You should make a completely new 16x16 Moc for Phase II. By completely new I mean stay away from this and anything similar.
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Re: Phase II entry WIP.

Post by LazerBlade on Sat Jun 19, 2010 1:24 am

Project is all finished!! The new title is The Force Unleashed II "Lazer's power unleashed".



I am opening up a new topic. Wink
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Re: Phase II entry WIP.

Post by Tac on Sat Jun 19, 2010 3:02 am

Looks like you won't be needing this thread anymore.
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