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Type 11 XSF

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Post by Commander Lukas Sun Jul 18, 2010 1:58 am

First: sorry about the pics, my light box was full of crap. I'll gett new ones soon.

The Type 11 ESF was a experimental star fighter used only by the 47 HWST legion.

It was armed with two rapid fire heavy blaster, X421 EMP, and can carry rockets or bombs. Not as manuverable as the V wing, but more agile then the ARC. Best when deployed as a CAS fighter with limited air superiority roles.

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Post by Rook Sun Jul 18, 2010 2:03 am

Ah Lucas this probably you worst MOC to date! Waaa! Sad You must have forgotten this CABG, not “failpages”. Razz You can do way better then this. Thumbs up
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Post by Commander Lukas Sun Jul 18, 2010 2:04 am

Rook wrote:Ah Lucas this probably you worst MOC to date! Waaa! Sad You must have forgotten this CABG, not “failpages”. Razz

Ah you spelled my name wrong again!
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Post by Troopa Daisy Sun Jul 18, 2010 3:07 am

I'm sorry, but this is pretty well let's just say not so good. There are absolutely no techniques used in this, pretty much anyone could make it. Wink
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Post by Rijulskywalker Sun Jul 18, 2010 3:16 am

Yeah, it's not that great, but it gave me inspiration to make my own plane-gone-starfighter! Good job for giving inspiration and building. Now you have to befriend.


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Post by Darman Sun Jul 18, 2010 4:37 am

Is this a joke? :d'oh: I agree with Rook, this is your worst Moc that you've soon us so far.
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Post by Darth Yoda Sun Jul 18, 2010 5:45 am

Spend more time on mocing, not making random stories and huge weapons lists... Laughing
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Post by Axel Sun Jul 18, 2010 5:47 am

Darth Yoda wrote:Spend more time on mocing, not making random stories and huge weapons lists... Laughing

Agreed...I don't see how a wimpy little vehicle like that could possibly carry all that weaponry.
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Post by Commander Lukas Sun Jul 18, 2010 5:01 pm

I see what I can do.
But this is in fact, my first MOC this year.
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Post by -Aki- Sun Jul 18, 2010 5:32 pm

In which case, why did you post it? If you are admitting that, you are clearly not happy with it, and why would you post/upload something your not happy with?

I would insert some comment criticising the flaws in this, but everyone else has already done that.
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Post by Jedi Joe Sun Jul 18, 2010 5:37 pm

Lukas, I like the concept and design, but it looks like Legoboy built it... Wait, scratch that, if he built it, it would be made out of 4x2s...

But the thing is, you need to add more complex techniques. The building is rather simple. The wings are barely anything except a few plates. I say you re-boot this MOC, and make it look more pleasing to the eye. Just look at Rook, LRV, Tac, Knight, Halen, BlackNinjaTom, me, and other good MOCers for inspiration. It may help you master techniques.
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Post by Alpha Beta Sun Jul 18, 2010 6:35 pm

The main body is a good start, but the wings and tail-fin are too small. It is plain and boring. Embarassed Wink
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Post by Commander Lukas Sun Jul 18, 2010 8:51 pm

Alpha Beta wrote:The main body is a good start, but the wings and tail-fin are too small. It is plain and boring. Embarassed Wink

Finaly a tip! Thanks I'll work on it.
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Post by Rijulskywalker Sun Jul 18, 2010 10:37 pm

Add more of a SW feel to it. It looks just like a plane to me, no offense.
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