Type 11 XSF
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Type 11 XSF
First: sorry about the pics, my light box was full of crap. I'll gett new ones soon.
The Type 11 ESF was a experimental star fighter used only by the 47 HWST legion.
It was armed with two rapid fire heavy blaster, X421 EMP, and can carry rockets or bombs. Not as manuverable as the V wing, but more agile then the ARC. Best when deployed as a CAS fighter with limited air superiority roles.
Overview.
Week geebles, I know.
Underside.
Side.
The Type 11 ESF was a experimental star fighter used only by the 47 HWST legion.
It was armed with two rapid fire heavy blaster, X421 EMP, and can carry rockets or bombs. Not as manuverable as the V wing, but more agile then the ARC. Best when deployed as a CAS fighter with limited air superiority roles.
Overview.
Week geebles, I know.
Underside.
Side.
Last edited by Commander Lukas on Sun Jul 18, 2010 5:00 pm; edited 1 time in total
Re: Type 11 XSF
Ah Lucas this probably you worst MOC to date! You must have forgotten this CABG, not “failpages”. You can do way better then this.
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Rook wrote:Ah Lucas this probably you worst MOC to date! You must have forgotten this CABG, not “failpages”.
Ah you spelled my name wrong again!
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I'm sorry, but this is pretty well let's just say not so good. There are absolutely no techniques used in this, pretty much anyone could make it.
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Yeah, it's not that great, but it gave me inspiration to make my own plane-gone-starfighter! Good job for giving inspiration and building. Now you have to befriend.
Rijulskywalker- Guild Member
- Location : In a galaxy far, far, away...
Re: Type 11 XSF
Is this a joke? :d'oh: I agree with Rook, this is your worst Moc that you've soon us so far.
Darman- Guild Member
- Age : 26
Location : America
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Darth Yoda wrote:Spend more time on mocing, not making random stories and huge weapons lists...
Agreed...I don't see how a wimpy little vehicle like that could possibly carry all that weaponry.
Axel- Non-Guild Member
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Location : Australia
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In which case, why did you post it? If you are admitting that, you are clearly not happy with it, and why would you post/upload something your not happy with?
I would insert some comment criticising the flaws in this, but everyone else has already done that.
I would insert some comment criticising the flaws in this, but everyone else has already done that.
-Aki-- Non-Guild Member
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Lukas, I like the concept and design, but it looks like Legoboy built it... Wait, scratch that, if he built it, it would be made out of 4x2s...
But the thing is, you need to add more complex techniques. The building is rather simple. The wings are barely anything except a few plates. I say you re-boot this MOC, and make it look more pleasing to the eye. Just look at Rook, LRV, Tac, Knight, Halen, BlackNinjaTom, me, and other good MOCers for inspiration. It may help you master techniques.
But the thing is, you need to add more complex techniques. The building is rather simple. The wings are barely anything except a few plates. I say you re-boot this MOC, and make it look more pleasing to the eye. Just look at Rook, LRV, Tac, Knight, Halen, BlackNinjaTom, me, and other good MOCers for inspiration. It may help you master techniques.
Jedi Joe- Guild Member
- Location : Florida, the state of neverending heat and humidity...
Re: Type 11 XSF
The main body is a good start, but the wings and tail-fin are too small. It is plain and boring.
Alpha Beta- Non-Guild Member
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Alpha Beta wrote:The main body is a good start, but the wings and tail-fin are too small. It is plain and boring.
Finaly a tip! Thanks I'll work on it.
Re: Type 11 XSF
Add more of a SW feel to it. It looks just like a plane to me, no offense.
Rijulskywalker- Guild Member
- Location : In a galaxy far, far, away...
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