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Type 11 XSF

Post by Commander Lukas on Sun Jul 18, 2010 1:58 am

First: sorry about the pics, my light box was full of crap. I'll gett new ones soon.

The Type 11 ESF was a experimental star fighter used only by the 47 HWST legion.

It was armed with two rapid fire heavy blaster, X421 EMP, and can carry rockets or bombs. Not as manuverable as the V wing, but more agile then the ARC. Best when deployed as a CAS fighter with limited air superiority roles.


Overview.


Week geebles, I know.


Underside.


Side.



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Re: Type 11 XSF

Post by Rook on Sun Jul 18, 2010 2:03 am

Ah Lucas this probably you worst MOC to date! Waaa! Sad You must have forgotten this CABG, not “failpages”. Razz You can do way better then this. Thumbs up

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Re: Type 11 XSF

Post by Commander Lukas on Sun Jul 18, 2010 2:04 am

Rook wrote:Ah Lucas this probably you worst MOC to date! Waaa! Sad You must have forgotten this CABG, not “failpages”. Razz

Ah you spelled my name wrong again!
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Re: Type 11 XSF

Post by Troopa Daisy on Sun Jul 18, 2010 3:07 am

I'm sorry, but this is pretty well let's just say not so good. There are absolutely no techniques used in this, pretty much anyone could make it. Wink
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Re: Type 11 XSF

Post by Rijulskywalker on Sun Jul 18, 2010 3:16 am

Yeah, it's not that great, but it gave me inspiration to make my own plane-gone-starfighter! Good job for giving inspiration and building. Now you have to befriend.


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Re: Type 11 XSF

Post by Darman on Sun Jul 18, 2010 4:37 am

Is this a joke? :d'oh: I agree with Rook, this is your worst Moc that you've soon us so far.
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Re: Type 11 XSF

Post by Darth Yoda on Sun Jul 18, 2010 5:45 am

Spend more time on mocing, not making random stories and huge weapons lists... Laughing
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Re: Type 11 XSF

Post by Axel on Sun Jul 18, 2010 5:47 am

Darth Yoda wrote:Spend more time on mocing, not making random stories and huge weapons lists... Laughing

Agreed...I don't see how a wimpy little vehicle like that could possibly carry all that weaponry.
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Re: Type 11 XSF

Post by Commander Lukas on Sun Jul 18, 2010 5:01 pm

I see what I can do.
But this is in fact, my first MOC this year.
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Re: Type 11 XSF

Post by -Aki- on Sun Jul 18, 2010 5:32 pm

In which case, why did you post it? If you are admitting that, you are clearly not happy with it, and why would you post/upload something your not happy with?

I would insert some comment criticising the flaws in this, but everyone else has already done that.
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Re: Type 11 XSF

Post by Jedi Joe on Sun Jul 18, 2010 5:37 pm

Lukas, I like the concept and design, but it looks like Legoboy built it... Wait, scratch that, if he built it, it would be made out of 4x2s...

But the thing is, you need to add more complex techniques. The building is rather simple. The wings are barely anything except a few plates. I say you re-boot this MOC, and make it look more pleasing to the eye. Just look at Rook, LRV, Tac, Knight, Halen, BlackNinjaTom, me, and other good MOCers for inspiration. It may help you master techniques.
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Re: Type 11 XSF

Post by Alpha Beta on Sun Jul 18, 2010 6:35 pm

The main body is a good start, but the wings and tail-fin are too small. It is plain and boring. Embarassed Wink
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Re: Type 11 XSF

Post by Commander Lukas on Sun Jul 18, 2010 8:51 pm

Alpha Beta wrote:The main body is a good start, but the wings and tail-fin are too small. It is plain and boring. Embarassed Wink

Finaly a tip! Thanks I'll work on it.
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Re: Type 11 XSF

Post by Rijulskywalker on Sun Jul 18, 2010 10:37 pm

Add more of a SW feel to it. It looks just like a plane to me, no offense.
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