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What Makes the Desert Beautiful

Post by Zepher on Wed Jul 21, 2010 4:02 am

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Editors Note: Sorry for the wait. I'll update the thread tomorrow with the previous issues section. Enjoy being dropped into the middle of nowhere! I liked this issue a lot.

-Zepher





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Re: What Makes the Desert Beautiful

Post by Troopa Daisy on Wed Jul 21, 2010 4:13 am

This story has a really good plot, but is it supposed to be "After the Fall"? Because the previous issue was still "Before the Fall" and you didn't say what happened to the main character in that issue. Wink Smile
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Post by eclipsegrafx on Wed Jul 21, 2010 5:47 am

Zepher is becoming a hollywood writer. Smile I love this story and how you dropped us in the middle of nowhere to eventually tie up both sides together and make us say OOOOHHHHH! I understand now. Razz I love movies like that.

Keep em coming.
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Post by bl*c on Wed Jul 21, 2010 2:08 pm

eclipsegrafx wrote:I love this story and how you dropped us in the middle of nowhere to eventually tie up both sides together and make us say OOOOHHHHH! I understand now. Razz
Same here! I loved this one and what you're doing. Wow this thing looks
Damn, I'm still taking guesses at what exactly happened to the world. :scratch: Wow this thing looks
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Re: What Makes the Desert Beautiful

Post by MuffinHobo on Wed Jul 21, 2010 4:37 pm

This sounds exciting! I can wait to see more from this new series. Post apocalyptic worlds are great for stories. This reminds me of Fallout and The Book of Eli.
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Re: What Makes the Desert Beautiful

Post by CowsRTasty on Wed Jul 21, 2010 4:45 pm

So, I'm guessing alien invasion...

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Re: What Makes the Desert Beautiful

Post by Tac on Wed Jul 21, 2010 4:46 pm

Wow this thing looks Wow this thing looks Wow this thing looks

I love this Zepher, I always look forward to your amazing comics!
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Re: What Makes the Desert Beautiful

Post by Zepher on Wed Jul 21, 2010 7:34 pm

eclipsegrafx wrote:Zepher is becoming a hollywood writer. Smile I love this story and how you dropped us in the middle of nowhere to eventually tie up both sides together and make us say OOOOHHHHH! I understand now. Razz I love movies like that.

Keep em coming.

Exactly. The Fall is the center of the story, but I'm skipping around it. This story is told in majorly not chronological order, but I think it will make sense to everyone. The great thing about planning way ahead is that I don't have to have "Oh S***, will this actually work and piece together" moments, since I have planned out how it will work!
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Re: What Makes the Desert Beautiful

Post by Alpha Beta on Thu Jul 22, 2010 1:46 am

Amazing. I agree with everyone else, it is a great idea to skip from character view to character view. My only complaint is that sometimes in the text it was The Fall, and then the fall. Wink
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Re: What Makes the Desert Beautiful

Post by legorevolution on Thu Jul 22, 2010 2:51 am

Have always loved your stories. You need some more pieces, or time, or another builder to create more detailed scenes however. Things I really liked from the comic was the idea that people had built enough to survive. Usually don't hear/see that in apoc stories. I also liked the idea of O.H. Looking forward to more as usual! Smile
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Re: What Makes the Desert Beautiful

Post by Green Tee on Thu Jul 22, 2010 3:00 am

Great job on the scenes and storyline, but the jump is a little confusing, but I bet we can all expect what happened will be explained.
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Re: What Makes the Desert Beautiful

Post by Zepher on Thu Jul 22, 2010 4:46 am

legorevolution wrote:Have always loved your stories. You need some more pieces, or time, or another builder to create more detailed scenes however. Things I really liked from the comic was the idea that people had built enough to survive. Usually don't hear/see that in apoc stories. I also liked the idea of O.H. Looking forward to more as usual! Smile

When I'm less pressed for time and featuring scene, I'll build scenes. Since this was mostly a narration comic, scenes take the back seat. When it is an action comic, scenes matter more. It was just snippets of his view here and there, so it was meant to be small scenes. I promise, I have more in store when we get to more interesting places and battles.

'Sides, the desert ain't that interesting anyway.
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Re: What Makes the Desert Beautiful

Post by Zepher on Thu Aug 05, 2010 6:55 pm

Sorry for the bump, just needed to announce somewhere that I wasn't dead and that a new episode is on it's way either tonight or tomorrow!
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Re: What Makes the Desert Beautiful

Post by Tac on Thu Aug 05, 2010 7:08 pm

Yay, lookin' forward to it Zeph. Wow this thing looks
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