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0-V32 Speeder

Post by Rabid Squirrel on Sun Jul 25, 2010 1:35 am

The 0-V32 was a speeder that I designed Razz used for transporting troops over a wide area. It was only used because it was extremely fast.

Yeah, I was just playing around with some SNOT and this is what I came up with. It is, as usual, over-greebled. Razz


More pictures will be posted when I come back from vacation. Wink



EDIT:Could a MOD move this to "Other Star Wars Creations"? Thanks!
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Re: 0-V32 Speeder

Post by Rook on Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:10 am

It's just a glob of bits! No driver, no panels, no lights, and no controls.

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Re: 0-V32 Speeder

Post by Halen on Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:16 am

I agree, there is enough greebs on this for something four times its size.
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Re: 0-V32 Speeder

Post by Darman on Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:33 am

In no way do I intend to offend you in this post, I'm being very serious. Grab a 16X16 Green Plate and plop this on, then make a snot floor to surround it and put some panels to cover a single area then slap on a mechanic and bam you got a amazing scene. Now as a speeder it is not very good, you did amazing greebling but you should never greeble to this extent on any moving vehicle. It looks like a hunk of spare parts, there isn't even a visible cockpit! This isn't a very good job Rabid. :d'oh:

Edit: Ok you guys really should get to fixing that :d'oh: smiley.
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Re: 0-V32 Speeder

Post by Tac on Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:55 am

Greebles are harder than they look. Making them what is basically a mess of dark gray pieces look like they serve a purpose is hard, but using them in the correct place is sometimes harder. The greebles here are amazing, some of the best I've seen, but they're out of place. A speeder should be streamline, so it goes faster. This looks like bits will start flying off the moment it goes over 10mph. Razz

I do have an idea though. First, take the light grey 2x2 round off, then make the handles bars face each other, like this: ( ). Next remove those curved pieces between the handlebars and replace it with something trans, so it looks like an engine. You now have a perfect detailed engine for a bigger MOC. Smile
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Re: 0-V32 Speeder

Post by Alpha Beta on Sun Jul 25, 2010 1:56 pm

Darman wrote:It looks like a hunk of spare parts, there isn't even a visible cockpit!

I agree with Darman, it does just look like a bunch of spare parts.
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Re: 0-V32 Speeder

Post by Rook on Sun Jul 25, 2010 1:59 pm

Darman wrote:In no way do I intend to offend you in this post, I'm being very serious. Grab a 16X16 Green Plate and plop this on, then make a snot floor to surround it and put some panels to cover a single area then slap on a mechanic and bam you got a amazing scene. Now as a speeder it is not very good, you did amazing greebling but you should never greeble to this extent on any moving vehicle. It looks like a hunk of spare parts, there isn't even a visible cockpit! This isn't a very good job Rabid. :d'oh:

Edit: Ok you guys really should get to fixing that :d'oh: smiley.

That is actually a very good recommendation. This in a maintenence bay would be freakin' awesome. Thumbs up

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Re: 0-V32 Speeder

Post by Troopa Daisy on Sun Jul 25, 2010 5:14 pm

Rook wrote:It's just a glob of bits! No driver, no panels, no lights, and no controls.

It could be automated space junk. Razz

But yeah, there's just too much greebling here, makes it not really look like anything, sorry. Wink
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Re: 0-V32 Speeder

Post by Jedi Joe on Sun Jul 25, 2010 5:27 pm

Rabid, you clearly are advanced, and you can greeble much better than I can. But this is way too much greebling. Try making your designs simpler and less cluttered with greebles. I know you can do it. Smile
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Re: 0-V32 Speeder

Post by Gerrard on Sun Jul 25, 2010 6:25 pm

Add some slopes and get rid of some greebles. Give it more of a shape, flow, and add some more color! Smile
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Re: 0-V32 Speeder

Post by Rabid Squirrel on Mon Jul 26, 2010 1:45 am

*Ahem*
I was just playing around with some SNOT
Yeah, my point exactly. And besides, I will post more pictures when I get back.
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Re: 0-V32 Speeder

Post by Commander Lukas on Mon Jul 26, 2010 2:03 am

An enemy must of hit it with a explosive of somthing...
...because theres no armor. Or any sorta skin for that matter!
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Re: 0-V32 Speeder

Post by Rabid Squirrel on Thu Jul 29, 2010 12:41 am

I started working on a docking bay before I left so don't worry there. Don't expect to see it for like another week and a half.
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Re: 0-V32 Speeder

Post by commando niner on Sat Jul 31, 2010 12:22 am

To me it looks like the batmobeal.

The what? Please use proper spelling so we can understand you. -Tac
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Re: 0-V32 Speeder

Post by Rabid Squirrel on Tue Aug 10, 2010 3:33 am

The hanger is looking meh, but just so you know, it was supposed to be a ship that had its armor stripped for repair. Wink
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