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Get out of there troopers

Post by Knight on Tue Jul 27, 2010 12:01 am

On the planet of Kilin-Kal the battle is slow. The 80th legion decided to send scouts, to blow up one of the 7 factories. The scouts advanced quickly and made it into the base with little resistance. Once they set and lit the charges, the factory blew into pieces! Sadly, forward scouts saw a battalion advance toward Aries. Good thing Darman has defenses there...







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Post by Justin Pyne on Tue Jul 27, 2010 12:11 am

I believe you posted this in the wrong area. From what I read, Guildies were supposed to post a reply to the original thread, not make one of their own. If I'm wrong, please let me know. I'm confused. Razz
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Post by ^Ninja Trooper^ on Tue Jul 27, 2010 12:15 am

I personally think you should put some bricks in the door way (Red, orange, yellow.) to simulate it blowing up from the inside. Wink

Everything else is good. I really like the landscaping done around the base, and I also like the tree. Smile
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Re: Get out of there troopers

Post by Knight on Tue Jul 27, 2010 12:37 am

Sergeant Macaroni wrote:I believe you posted this in the wrong area. From what I read, Guildies were supposed to post a reply to the original thread, not make one of their own. If I'm wrong, please let me know. I'm confused. Razz

Both, I just posted it in the other thread.

@-Thanks for the comments guys! Smile
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Post by Steg on Tue Jul 27, 2010 1:01 am

Very good, but the smooth slopes on the rock formation bug me. And maybe add some more fire to the blown-up base.
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Re: Get out of there troopers

Post by Tac on Tue Jul 27, 2010 1:20 am

The last view is the best. It captures the explosion and fleeing scouts perfectly! The only thing I don't like is the sand green rocks, at first I thought it was a vehicle for the scouts! I'd either add sand green to the ground or replace it with something else. Smile
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Re: Get out of there troopers

Post by Darman on Tue Jul 27, 2010 1:37 am

Once again amazing job Knight, my only issue is that the explosions seem very flimsy without bricks or some kind of wall behind them. Smile
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Post by bl*c on Tue Jul 27, 2010 3:54 pm

That last pic is sooo awesome! Wow this thing looks

But I feel you should have used more curved pieces on the rock. All the slopes mixed with two or three curved pieces looks a little awkward. Wink

Great job overall! Smile
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Re: Get out of there troopers

Post by Knight on Tue Jul 27, 2010 4:25 pm

Tac wrote:The last view is the best. It captures the explosion and fleeing scouts perfectly! The only thing I don't like is the sand green rocks, at first I thought it was a vehicle for the scouts! I'd either add sand green to the ground or replace it with something else. Smile

The sand and dark green are moss. There is a little sand green on the ground and tree, but the color is very hard to come by. Sad

@-Thanks for the great comments everyone! Smile
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Post by Troopa Daisy on Tue Jul 27, 2010 4:55 pm

I agree with Tac, the sand green on the rocks doesn't quite look like moss. But the exploding factory and the droid flying through it goes perfectly with the rest of the scene. Wink Smile
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Re: Get out of there troopers

Post by Alpha Beta on Sat Jul 31, 2010 5:27 pm

Great job, I love the fire effects.
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