Get out of there troopers
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Tac
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Justin Pyne
Knight
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Get out of there troopers
On the planet of Kilin-Kal the battle is slow. The 80th legion decided to send scouts, to blow up one of the 7 factories. The scouts advanced quickly and made it into the base with little resistance. Once they set and lit the charges, the factory blew into pieces! Sadly, forward scouts saw a battalion advance toward Aries. Good thing Darman has defenses there...
Last edited by Knight on Tue Jul 27, 2010 12:38 am; edited 1 time in total
Knight- VIP Former Staff
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Re: Get out of there troopers
I believe you posted this in the wrong area. From what I read, Guildies were supposed to post a reply to the original thread, not make one of their own. If I'm wrong, please let me know. I'm confused.
Justin Pyne- Guild Member
- Age : 27
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Re: Get out of there troopers
I personally think you should put some bricks in the door way (Red, orange, yellow.) to simulate it blowing up from the inside.
Everything else is good. I really like the landscaping done around the base, and I also like the tree.
Everything else is good. I really like the landscaping done around the base, and I also like the tree.
^Ninja Trooper^- Guild Member
- Age : 28
Re: Get out of there troopers
Sergeant Macaroni wrote:I believe you posted this in the wrong area. From what I read, Guildies were supposed to post a reply to the original thread, not make one of their own. If I'm wrong, please let me know. I'm confused.
Both, I just posted it in the other thread.
@-Thanks for the comments guys!
Knight- VIP Former Staff
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Re: Get out of there troopers
Very good, but the smooth slopes on the rock formation bug me. And maybe add some more fire to the blown-up base.
Re: Get out of there troopers
The last view is the best. It captures the explosion and fleeing scouts perfectly! The only thing I don't like is the sand green rocks, at first I thought it was a vehicle for the scouts! I'd either add sand green to the ground or replace it with something else.
Re: Get out of there troopers
Once again amazing job Knight, my only issue is that the explosions seem very flimsy without bricks or some kind of wall behind them.
Darman- Guild Member
- Age : 26
Location : America
Re: Get out of there troopers
That last pic is sooo awesome!
But I feel you should have used more curved pieces on the rock. All the slopes mixed with two or three curved pieces looks a little awkward.
Great job overall!
But I feel you should have used more curved pieces on the rock. All the slopes mixed with two or three curved pieces looks a little awkward.
Great job overall!
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Tac wrote:The last view is the best. It captures the explosion and fleeing scouts perfectly! The only thing I don't like is the sand green rocks, at first I thought it was a vehicle for the scouts! I'd either add sand green to the ground or replace it with something else.
The sand and dark green are moss. There is a little sand green on the ground and tree, but the color is very hard to come by.
@-Thanks for the great comments everyone!
Knight- VIP Former Staff
- Location : Anywhere with lego.
Re: Get out of there troopers
I agree with Tac, the sand green on the rocks doesn't quite look like moss. But the exploding factory and the droid flying through it goes perfectly with the rest of the scene.
Re: Get out of there troopers
Great job, I love the fire effects.
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