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^Ninja Trooper^
1 Million Watts of Power
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On my count... 1... 2...
Commander's log:
After the 223rd heard of the 80th Legion's sucess of blowing up the 1st factory, we decided 'at we'd take the second. I remember when we approached the more rocky part of the large lot in the rather remote city of Kandraan. I told my men the words: "On my count..." We attacked the factory which those dumb bucket-heads left unguarded. We planted the bombs and quickly got out as possible, only to be noticed by an engineer droid, who sounded the alarm. To bad for them that it didn't matter. We escaped real quickly after that, and to my surprise, not one of my men died that day...
Enjoy!
After the 223rd heard of the 80th Legion's sucess of blowing up the 1st factory, we decided 'at we'd take the second. I remember when we approached the more rocky part of the large lot in the rather remote city of Kandraan. I told my men the words: "On my count..." We attacked the factory which those dumb bucket-heads left unguarded. We planted the bombs and quickly got out as possible, only to be noticed by an engineer droid, who sounded the alarm. To bad for them that it didn't matter. We escaped real quickly after that, and to my surprise, not one of my men died that day...
Enjoy!
Last edited by 1 Million Watts Of Power on Wed Jul 28, 2010 4:01 pm; edited 1 time in total
Re: On my count... 1... 2...
Very nice back story. The factory lacks some greebles, and the tree doesn't have enough branches for my liking.
Other than that, I like it.
Other than that, I like it.
^Ninja Trooper^- Guild Member
- Age : 28
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The layering is decent but I guess theirs not much you can do about that since the majority of builders lack a sufficient number of green tiles. My main issue with this Moc is that the walls of the factory are completely and totally bland, they have no greebles whatsoever, if you did that the Moc in my opinion would look 10 times better.
Darman- Guild Member
- Age : 26
Location : America
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Nothing special, but there are some good techniques here and the backstory is nice.
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Yes, the back story is great; I also like the rock formation under the base and the terrain/layering.
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I love the back story, there was some mistakes in it, but very nice.
The clones are okay, they could use decals though!
The clones are okay, they could use decals though!
Guest- Guest
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Good backstory and the outdoor area is nice, but the factory is lacking something.
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