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Project 6: SBB

Post by MuffinHobo on Sun Aug 01, 2010 1:05 am

This started as a little table scrap and it's my first real step back into Lego. So go easy on me!

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Republic undercover vehicle program used to infiltrate CIS armies.

Part of the story I'm writing for the 13th Stealth & Recon Legion. It's meant to be a prototype that my legion is developing to go under cover in CIS armies. Only a few hundred of these units were deployed and used rarely. Their fatal flaw was the small heat signature that each clone gave off no matter how much armor was used to hide it.

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Post by Hazard with a Glove on Sun Aug 01, 2010 1:43 am

It needs less blur...

IMO, I think the little 'T' like piece connecting the legs with the body should be changed. It is way to thin for the rest of it.
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Post by MuffinHobo on Sun Aug 01, 2010 1:47 am

I agree completely about the legs. I don't really like the connection either. The picture quality should be better in some of the gallery pictures.
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Post by Troopa Daisy on Sun Aug 01, 2010 6:00 pm

It's a good start but I think that the legs look a bit too stubby and maybe if you could make an elbow for the arms so it could bend and enlarge the front a bit so it covers more of the trooper I think it would look better. Wink
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Post by Alpha Beta on Sun Aug 01, 2010 9:52 pm

It is a good start, but there is room for improvement.
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Post by MuffinHobo on Sun Aug 01, 2010 10:19 pm

Troopa Daisy wrote:It's a good start but I think that the legs look a bit too stubby and maybe if you could make an elbow for the arms so it could bend and enlarge the front a bit so it covers more of the trooper I think it would look better. Wink

Thanks Troopa for the comment and as I said before I couldn't agree more about the legs. The front actually as a trans-black windshield in front of it if you couldn't see so it's not to sparse up front. The elbows not being able to are a disappointment but it doesn't effect the playability. I'm actually think of developing this into a larger mecha but this is a test for it. I really wanted to know what people thought of the idea and style.

@AlphaBeta- REALLY helpful comment you've provided me with. Thanks!
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Post by Sergeant B on Mon Aug 02, 2010 7:54 am

I quite like it but if it's seperatist, why is there a clone in it?
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Post by Tac on Mon Aug 02, 2010 9:35 am

Reading helps:

MuffinHobo wrote:Republic undercover vehicle program used to infiltrate CIS armies.

I love this idea, I can imagine them being used in TCW. Smile
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