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Prototype speeder

Post by Commander Lukas on Sun Aug 15, 2010 6:44 pm

If someone has a better name PM me.
It's a classic. Like a '60 Camaro now.











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Re: Prototype speeder

Post by Troopa Daisy on Sun Aug 15, 2010 9:02 pm

The front looks good, but I don't like the tire cover pieces sticking out of the side in the back, it makes it look a little awkward. Wink Smile
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Re: Prototype speeder

Post by Doraff on Mon Aug 16, 2010 12:56 am

Troopa Daisy wrote:The front looks good, but I don't like the tire cover pieces sticking out of the side in the back, it makes it look a little awkward. Wink Smile

Way to be a "downer" (Sort of...)! I think it looks great! I'm amazed you have all the pieces to match everything. Maybe you should throw in some republic red! All Hail!
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Post by Gerrard on Mon Aug 16, 2010 3:26 am

Pretty good, but the front being rectangular doesn't really fit. Try to make it more angled toward the front?
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Re: Prototype speeder

Post by The Jinja Ninja on Mon Aug 16, 2010 1:51 pm

What to the light grey wheels on the side do?
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Re: Prototype speeder

Post by Aerial Trooper Nitro on Mon Aug 16, 2010 2:19 pm

You could add some red and make it a "Firebird".
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Re: Prototype speeder

Post by bl*c on Mon Aug 16, 2010 3:29 pm

The Jinja Ninja wrote:What to the light grey wheels on the side do?
Laughing

As Jinja said, a lot of greebles are just too random. Shocked Wink

The actual vehicle and its shape are nice though. Smile
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Re: Prototype speeder

Post by Rook on Mon Aug 16, 2010 4:29 pm

You desperately need a new back drop. Go buy a poster board for the dollar store! Looks really dirty and gross. Sad

PS: MOC looks ok if you turned the half circle pieces on their sides so that open part is in the centre of the MOC this would have been a win.
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Re: Prototype speeder

Post by Guest on Mon Aug 16, 2010 4:40 pm

Looks good, but as Rook said, the backdrop is really dirty.
If you still need a name, try something like "The Box" or something of that type, because it looks really boxy.

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Re: Prototype speeder

Post by Commander Lukas on Mon Aug 16, 2010 4:58 pm

Rook wrote:You desperately need a new back drop. Go buy a poster board for the dollar store! Looks really dirty and gross. Sad

PS: MOC looks ok if you turned the half circle pieces on their sides so that open part is in the centre of the MOC this would have been a win.

My cat ate it. I'll see if we have any new paper now.

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"'the_Customizer"]Looks good, but as Rook said, the backdrop is really dirty.
If you still need a name, try something like "The Box" or something of that type, because it looks really boxy
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Older is normal a bit boxy
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Re: Prototype speeder

Post by Jedi Joe on Mon Aug 16, 2010 5:46 pm

Pretty nice. It reminds me of old Ford Mustangs and Chevy Camaros. I would try to turn the half-oval pieces on the side though, and greeble the inside of those. That would even make it look more like a classic muscle car grille.
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Re: Prototype speeder

Post by Bossk on Mon Aug 16, 2010 10:52 pm

Pretty nice speeder, though a few greebles on the back side (specifically that gray droid torso/body) seem weird.
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Re: Prototype speeder

Post by Devib Andfor on Sat Sep 25, 2010 8:07 pm

Looks really bulky and could use some Republic red or CIS blue too much grey. Other than that I like the look and shape of the front and like Rook said you should turn the half circles. But its alright for a MOC. Razz

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