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Y-9 Racing Speeder

Post by Darman on Thu Aug 19, 2010 1:50 am

I'm not going to bother with a back story here. This was originally suppose to be a E-Wing but it kind of turned into this. Not the best I know but it was my first honest attempt at any type of ship.








Like is said before, this is my first attempt at a ship of any so a lot of constructive criticism and some slack is appreciated.
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Re: Y-9 Racing Speeder

Post by Hazard with a Glove on Thu Aug 19, 2010 1:51 am

Pretty good! But I think it could use color.
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Post by Darman on Thu Aug 19, 2010 1:52 am

Hazard with a Glove wrote:Pretty good! But I think it could use color.

I think blue white and grey is a perfectly fine color scheme. Razz Thanks for the response, and I'll look into adding more color. Smile
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Post by bl*c on Thu Aug 19, 2010 1:58 am

Darman wrote:
Hazard with a Glove wrote:Pretty good! But I think it could use color.
I think blue white and grey is a perfectly fine color scheme. Razz Thanks for the response, and I'll look into adding more color. Smile
I don't see any blue. :scratch: Ohh, you mean the engines. Razz

This is no E-Wing, but it's still pretty cool. Smile
Though I'm not sure about that silver exhaust thingy in the back...
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Re: Y-9 Racing Speeder

Post by Darman on Thu Aug 19, 2010 2:00 am

bl*c wrote:
Darman wrote:
Hazard with a Glove wrote:Pretty good! But I think it could use color.
I think blue white and grey is a perfectly fine color scheme. Razz Thanks for the response, and I'll look into adding more color. Smile
I don't see any blue. :scratch: Ohh, you mean the engines. Razz

This is no E-Wing, but it's still pretty cool. Smile
Though I'm not sure about that silver exhaust thingy in the back...

The nose was originally part of a E-Wing but my ideas and lack of patience to lack parts resulted in this. You mean the chrome engine right?
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Post by bl*c on Thu Aug 19, 2010 2:01 am

Yeah, it looks out of place IMO, but I don't know if a slope will work either. :scratch:
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Post by Darman on Thu Aug 19, 2010 2:03 am

The slope in the end of the frontal nose? I partially agree. The slope isn't gradual enough and is just flat a little grove and a jump upwards, doesn't look that well.
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Post by bl*c on Thu Aug 19, 2010 2:06 am

I meant I'm not sure if a slope piece would look good instead of that silver engine thing.

But now that you mention I kinda agree, maybe if you get rid of that tile up front it'll flow better.
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Post by Darman on Thu Aug 19, 2010 2:07 am

Oh, I disagree I don't thinking replacing the engine with slopes is such a good idea. :scratch:

Edit: Now you all have definite prove I have no proficiency in ship building. Razz
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Re: Y-9 Racing Speeder

Post by Troopa Daisy on Thu Aug 19, 2010 6:04 am

The front looks okay, but the back looks weird with piece wings instead of built up ones. Wink Smile
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Post by Darman on Thu Aug 19, 2010 5:13 pm

Thanks Troopa, now do you mean it being a single piece that throws the Moc off?
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Post by Troopa Daisy on Thu Aug 19, 2010 5:36 pm

Darman wrote:Thanks Troopa, now do you mean it being a single piece that throws the Moc off?

Yeah, you see how you used that wing piece that is normally used on spaceships for the majority of the wings? I think instead of that it should be brick built. Wink Smile
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Re: Y-9 Racing Speeder

Post by Darman on Thu Aug 19, 2010 5:45 pm

Troopa Daisy wrote:
Darman wrote:Thanks Troopa, now do you mean it being a single piece that throws the Moc off?

Yeah, you see how you used that wing piece that is normally used on spaceships for the majority of the wings? I think instead of that it should be brick built. Wink Smile

OK, I'll take that in mind. Smile
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Re: Y-9 Racing Speeder

Post by LazerBlade on Thu Aug 19, 2010 6:10 pm

Hey, great start. It needs some work though. Here is what you could fix. Wink



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Re: Y-9 Racing Speeder

Post by Darman on Thu Aug 19, 2010 6:11 pm

All I see are red boxes, could you explain what exactly is wrong inside those red boxes? Razz Thanks for the response.
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Re: Y-9 Racing Speeder

Post by LazerBlade on Thu Aug 19, 2010 6:18 pm

1. Not a smooth connection. Embarassed


2. The nose looks really bad. One side has a gap. Embarassed


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Re: Y-9 Racing Speeder

Post by Darman on Thu Aug 19, 2010 6:20 pm

OK thanks, I can't do much about the gap though. Embarassed
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