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Post by LazerBlade on Thu Aug 26, 2010 11:34 pm

I have not done animation for a long time now. This is what I was working on. I know it is not as good as my MOC's. Razz

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A3zQztrahJM
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Re: Test animation

Post by Darman on Thu Aug 26, 2010 11:38 pm

1. Arms ought to be swinging. 2. Animation +. Quality + 3. The way the camera keeps focusing in and out is annoying 4. When you zoomed in on the clones you were obviously moving the camera with your hands. 5 Voice acting, wasn't so good.
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Re: Test animation

Post by LazerBlade on Thu Aug 26, 2010 11:39 pm

Darman wrote:1. Arms ought to be swinging. 2. Animation +. Quality + 3. The way the camera keeps focusing in and out is annoying 4. When you zoomed in on the clones you were obviously moving the camera with your hands. 5 Voice acting, wasn't so good.

You can not copy and paste from chat room to forum. Razz

Thanks for the advise. Wink I will work on it a little. Smile Redo it. Waaa!
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Re: Test animation

Post by Darman on Thu Aug 26, 2010 11:41 pm

Advice Wink not advise, and you can copy and paste from it just takes a couple tries.
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Re: Test animation

Post by bl*c on Thu Aug 26, 2010 11:43 pm

What Darman said.

The camera wobbled too much, the camera focus was 'eh, and I didn't understand a word but "My lord."
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Re: Test animation

Post by LazerBlade on Fri Aug 27, 2010 1:04 am

bl*c wrote:What Darman said.

The camera wobbled too much, the camera focus was 'eh, and I didn't understand a word but "My lord."


Turn your volume up some more.
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Re: Test animation

Post by N8 on Fri Aug 27, 2010 2:29 am

A good animation, but like what everyone else says. Also the voices sound like mumbling...
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Re: Test animation

Post by Troopa Daisy on Fri Aug 27, 2010 5:35 am

A good start, but the camera movements are a bit choppy and there could be more frames if it was a stopmotion which I think it was. Wink Smile
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