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The Butterfly - Guild Challenge

Post by Gerrard on Sun Sep 05, 2010 11:21 pm

For some reason when I saw this, it reminded me of a butterfly. Razz

I did a few modifications, like making long wings, and smoothing things out. I was running low on tiles and I don't have many light gray tiles, so I had to improvise.

Once again I don't have a camera in my house that can take one good picture of an MOC I make. Roll Eyes
This is for the guild build between Lazer and I. Smile

The Night Butterfly



Front:


Cockpit Area:


Wings:


Back:


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Re: The Butterfly - Guild Challenge

Post by 667thLegion on Sun Sep 05, 2010 11:35 pm

Um, the picture quality is so bad you can't post it? Razz
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Re: The Butterfly - Guild Challenge

Post by Gerrard on Sun Sep 05, 2010 11:36 pm

No, I posted it, but then I saw how bad the quality was. Wink
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Re: The Butterfly - Guild Challenge

Post by Troopa Daisy on Sun Sep 05, 2010 11:53 pm

Eh, I still don't like the large part in the front. Wink
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Re: The Butterfly - Guild Challenge

Post by Gerrard on Mon Sep 06, 2010 1:42 am

Troopa Daisy wrote:Eh, I still don't like the large part in the front. Wink

That's what sort of makes it special. Razz
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Re: The Butterfly - Guild Challenge

Post by bl*c on Mon Sep 06, 2010 2:28 am

Besides the grey tiles, I like this MOC. Thumbs up

Oh, and that thing up front does make it different; so all the more better. :p
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Re: The Butterfly - Guild Challenge

Post by Knight on Mon Sep 06, 2010 3:27 pm

Sorry Gerrard, but I'm not a fan of this one. It has something going, but needs some touching up. First, if you have more light bley bricks, go with SNOT wings, instead of using tiles. It'll look smooth, and there are some good possibilities! Next the cockpit seems very X-wing like, which is fine, but maybe switch it up a bit with some greebles, and more slopes. The nose needs to be a little less blocky, using 1x2 brackets and adding slopes on the side could fix that problem quick. If you can make to those changes, this will be one great MOC! Smile
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Re: The Butterfly - Guild Challenge

Post by Alpha Beta on Mon Sep 06, 2010 3:53 pm

Not really a night butterfly is it, change the name. A night butterfly would be black or bley.
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Re: The Butterfly - Guild Challenge

Post by Gerrard on Mon Sep 06, 2010 4:07 pm

Knight wrote:Sorry Gerrard, but I'm not a fan of this one. It has something going, but needs some touching up. First, if you have more light bley bricks, go with SNOT wings, instead of using tiles. It'll look smooth, and there are some good possibilities! Next the cockpit seems very X-wing like, which is fine, but maybe switch it up a bit with some greebles, and more slopes. The nose needs to be a little less blocky, using 1x2 brackets and adding slopes on the side could fix that problem quick. If you can make to those changes, this will be one great MOC! Smile

Thanks for the constructive C@C man, I will definitely take these suggestions and update it! Smile
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The Butterfly- Guild Challenge

Post by alome on Mon Sep 06, 2010 6:05 pm

The front looks looks a little bulky, but other than that, looks good.
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Re: The Butterfly - Guild Challenge

Post by N8 on Mon Sep 06, 2010 9:04 pm

My friend, it's way too reminiscent (that's how it's spelled, right?) of an X-wing. What I would suggest is that you should switch the cockpit or change the way the wings look.
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