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Bounty Hunter ship

Post by Rijulskywalker on Wed Sep 22, 2010 11:19 pm

I felt like Bley and because I needed a better BrickArk entry Razz . And I've got more angles for you guys. There is landing gear that works and is sturdy, but I couldn't get a way to photograph the underside.
So without further ado, here is the


Bounty Hunter Ship!










C&C appreciated. Wow this thing looks


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Post by LazerBlade on Wed Sep 22, 2010 11:24 pm

To much Dark Bluish Grey. The cockpit could be switched around. And the engines don't look that great, neither do those 3 technic pins on either side of the wings, and the wings could be put at a slight angle .

Other then that, stay away from just one color. Wink


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Re: Bounty Hunter ship

Post by Rijulskywalker on Wed Sep 22, 2010 11:25 pm

So do you think I should stick to improving my first entry or improve this one wih your advice?
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Post by LazerBlade on Wed Sep 22, 2010 11:27 pm

You had a first entry? Embarassed :scratch:
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Re: Bounty Hunter ship

Post by Rijulskywalker on Wed Sep 22, 2010 11:29 pm

Yep, the Delta-9 Aetherstrike in this same forum.
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Post by LazerBlade on Wed Sep 22, 2010 11:34 pm

Use your first entry. Wink But it does need some work. Smile
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Re: Bounty Hunter ship

Post by Troopa Daisy on Wed Sep 22, 2010 11:34 pm

Did you get part of the front cockpit idea from my V-Wing? Wink Smile
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Re: Bounty Hunter ship

Post by Rijulskywalker on Wed Sep 22, 2010 11:41 pm

Funny you asked. I ,surprisingly, got the idea from Knight's HLC Mk. I. I wanted to build one like it, and when I came to the cockpit, that's how the cockpit turned out. But then it was very delicate, but the cockpit was strong and was still in one piece. So the rest of the body came from there. But I see the similarity in the windshield and shape now. It may have been in the back of my head while building it... Smile
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Post by RubbahBand on Thu Sep 23, 2010 1:14 am

I advise you incorporate another color that isn't used in a MOC much. Possible Light Blue, Orange, Purple, or Lime Green.
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Post by bl*c on Thu Sep 23, 2010 1:33 am

Its flatness disturbs me. And it looks bulky because of its flatness. Sorry, not feeling it in this one, Rijul.
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Re: Bounty Hunter ship

Post by Jedi Joe on Thu Sep 23, 2010 1:49 am

Aw, did Tac die now? Crap...

Razz

Nah, it's pretty good. Looks like something Tac would build. Razz
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Post by Hazard with a Glove on Thu Sep 23, 2010 2:19 am

IMO, it's not even very 'Tac-y'.

Tac doesn't really use the sloped and SNOT'd body technique.

And both your entries use that as they primary technique or w/e. IMO, you need soemthing else. And I agree, the over dose of bley is unsettling.
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Re: Bounty Hunter ship

Post by Rijulskywalker on Thu Sep 23, 2010 2:40 am

I will be scrapping this and making something else. Thank you for the comments, they really helped. Criticism can be a good thing. Smile
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Re: Bounty Hunter ship

Post by Tac on Thu Sep 23, 2010 7:17 am

It needs more colour, Sky. Razz
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Re: Bounty Hunter ship

Post by Commander Balmer on Thu Oct 14, 2010 7:52 am

It looks like a lego star wars batmobile!

Hmmmm I wonder what a Lego star wars batman would look like?
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