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Post by Axel Mon Dec 20, 2010 12:04 am

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I haven't posted a vignette in forever, especially a Star Wars themed one. Quick build, took around 15 minutes.

Usual CW backstory...421st Legion defending planet 'blah' against hostile forces...



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Post by Rabid Squirrel Mon Dec 20, 2010 1:11 am

The backstory is so well written, and yet so true!
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Post by train 01 Mon Dec 20, 2010 1:44 am

Other then the fact that it's a bit small, it's pretty good. I like the purple arms since you don't see them very often. Smile
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Post by Troopa Daisy Mon Dec 20, 2010 2:16 am

I'm liking that "hole" on the right side where that guy is sticking his gun through I think that's a good idea using the 1x1 clip holding a tile. Smile
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Post by Wickedskillz Mon Dec 20, 2010 2:46 am

Wow, this is pretty good for a 15 minute MOC. I like the greebling, and I wouldn't mind some advice on greebling myself...
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Post by Rabid Squirrel Mon Dec 20, 2010 2:48 am

212th wickedskillz wrote:Wow, this is pretty good for a 15 minute MOC. I like the greebling, and I wouldn't mind some advice on greebling myself...
Lots of it, but not too much, A.K.A. don't cover the whole MOC with greebles. Make it random. Make it dark bley or black, (best colors) certain other colors could work too.


On the other hand, I agree with TD, nice job on the sniper-ish guy.
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Post by Fithboy Mon Dec 20, 2010 7:34 am

I agree that the back story is excellent Razz.
Anyway, the MOC is great, the greebles are really good Smile.
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Post by why Mon Dec 20, 2010 7:22 pm

Meh, there's not much here... It looks like you just got a plate, and added those greeble pieces everywhere. Then, from this pic, it looks like there's none behind the walls. Then there are just the clones basically standing there or walking. It could be a start to something, but right now... It's not much.
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Post by LazerBlade Mon Dec 20, 2010 7:43 pm

I am liking this. Alot of great geebling. Wink The purple really does make this all go together. Great job and you might want to add some more stuff right behind the wall. Like some crates. Wink

A toast!
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Post by Axel Tue Dec 21, 2010 12:11 am

why wrote:Meh, there's not much here... It looks like you just got a plate, and added those greeble pieces everywhere. Then, from this pic, it looks like there's none behind the walls. Then there are just the clones basically standing there or walking. It could be a start to something, but right now... It's not much.

Like I said, 15 minute build, not much thought put into it. Greebles have always been easy to do for me, so I tend to use them when I can't think of anything else. Maybe I'll build a bunch of these and put them together... Razz


LazerBlade wrote:I am liking this. Alot of great geebling. Wink The purple really does make this all go together. Great job and you might want to add some more stuff right behind the wall. Like some crates. Wink

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There actually are a couple of crates next to the trooper on the left...unfortunately you can't make them out in the photo. There's also a couple of guns behind the wall to the right as well.
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Post by ^Ninja Trooper^ Tue Dec 21, 2010 2:32 am

This is nice for a quick 15 minute moc! I love the trooper with heavy, rotating blaster! My only nit-pick would be that the first 2 studs across the plate seem a bit over-greebled. Wink Smile
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Post by Rook Tue Dec 21, 2010 6:27 pm

A little weak on complexity but still looks good with those Purple Clones. Wow this thing looks
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Post by why Tue Dec 21, 2010 7:28 pm

[quote="Axel"] ~Snipped~

Like I said, 15 minute build, not much thought put into it. Greebles have always been easy to do for me, so I tend to use them when I can't think of anything else. Maybe I'll build a bunch of these and put them together... Razz

Add a large(ish) building that's run down then. That would look very nice IMO.


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There actually are a couple of crates next to the trooper on the left...unfortunately you can't make them out in the photo. There's also a couple of guns behind the wall to the right as well.

So I see... disregard my earlier message then. /quote]



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Post by Gordonblixt Tue Jan 04, 2011 6:29 pm

Sweet! The greebling looks awesome.
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