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762nd - The Sarmerran Campaign (Part 1)

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Post by MikeZulu Sat Feb 06, 2010 5:05 pm

Just like my Banshees, this turned out to be sh*t as well, but it's done now. Don't expect a second part...



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Post by Troopa Daisy Sat Feb 06, 2010 5:25 pm

That was actually okay, MZ. The image editing was actually really nice. Wink Smile
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Post by Commando 45 Sat Feb 06, 2010 5:33 pm

Troopa Daisy wrote:That was actually okay, MZ. The image editing was actually really nice. Wink Smile
I agree. I like the effects with the gunship's landing. Why don't you try to make another one?
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Post by Hazard with a Glove Sat Feb 06, 2010 5:42 pm

I think it was good, and would love to see more of this.
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Post by bl*c Sat Feb 06, 2010 6:21 pm

Nice! I agree with the others you should make a sequel Smile.
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Post by Flickr Customizer Sat Feb 06, 2010 7:51 pm

Very cool comic and the customs are great too! Can't wait to see the second part....
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Post by CloneCommandoXion Sat Feb 06, 2010 9:53 pm

I thought it was great. I like the amount of action going on. I wish I knew how to do this stuff. Sad
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Post by Comrade Faie Sat Feb 06, 2010 10:02 pm

Definitely the new Sial.

Great job, it really looks like a comic.
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Post by Man on fire Sat Feb 06, 2010 10:10 pm

Love it, just love it. The effects are amazing, and the storyline is crazy. Sweet! Smile
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Post by Dark Ranger Sat Feb 06, 2010 10:39 pm

Wonderful. So much effects, I wonder how long that took just for one picture.
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Post by PhiMa Sat Feb 06, 2010 11:34 pm

/ditto everyone else.

I like the comicbook-esque feel you gave it, and I think you should continue.
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Post by eclipsegrafx Sun Feb 07, 2010 2:26 am

GREAT JOB!

The lighting really pulled everything together.
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Post by Custom 333 Thu Feb 18, 2010 6:19 pm

It's a bit bright and colorful, I think turning down the saturation would do. Other than that it's awesome!
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Post by DarthPineapple Thu Feb 18, 2010 6:24 pm

Brilliant. Just brilliant. Superb editing, nice story. I really enjoyed reading it. Smile
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Post by -Aki- Thu Feb 18, 2010 6:46 pm

I love this. It's very well presented, has good action, and the clones just look fantastic.
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Post by Star Warts Sat Feb 20, 2010 1:40 pm

Aki said exactly what I was going to say. Smile
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Post by Alpha Beta Sat Feb 20, 2010 2:00 pm

Great job! Smile The only problelm is that it looks a little too bright. It almost seems like a cartoon type of thing, so just tone the colors down, and use lego backdrops.
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Post by eclipsegrafx Sat Feb 20, 2010 4:02 pm

Alpha Beta wrote:Great job! Smile The only problelm is that it looks a little too bright. It almost seems like a cartoon type of thing, so just tone the colors down, and use lego backdrops.

I think it was meant to be that way. The brightness that lends to the cartoon is what gives it a nice comic book touch. Looks like a hi-gloss comic.

I think it is perfect the way it is, I wouldn't change a thing and I seldomly say that.
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Post by Alpha Beta Sat Feb 20, 2010 9:31 pm

Sorry, I like it better with less cartoon like colors. I never said that it wasn't a good comic, I think it is great, I would do it differently though.
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Post by 80-0 Sat Feb 20, 2010 9:54 pm

The superb quality of your custom clones was icing on the cake for this; I also love that electro-pulse sniper rifle. It makes me think of the Gauss Rifle from Crysis... but I digress.

Plus, the way you gave it a realistic feeling, like the Republic was actually landing on a Naboo-esque planet, was well-done.
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Post by Clonecommando007 Wed Feb 24, 2010 12:02 am

Very professional layout and editing! Nice job!
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Post by Tital Wave Sun Feb 28, 2010 4:46 am

You really should continue this. Very nice looking, great effects, and your customs amaze me.
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Post by Guest Fri Mar 19, 2010 8:36 pm

It looks really good. I like the laser shots and the lightning thingy.
Maybe you could have the slides going horizontal rather then vertical. It makes it easier to read that way.

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Please don't ban me for this accident.
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Post by thebrickbear Thu Dec 30, 2010 9:33 pm

Great! When are you releasing the part 2? I can't wait!!! Smile

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