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Padawan Training *REVISED EDITION*

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Padawan Training *REVISED EDITION*

Post by Green Tee on Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:15 pm

8x8 vignette:
A disappointed Jedi teacher looks on as Padawan Zori Qayar fails miserably. The training drone has beat him again, flinging his lightsaber into the wall, making an awkward burn.
The Jedi teacher is my sigfig, Yenta Ulos.
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Post by Joboness on Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:23 pm

It's great, 'cept it looks a little cramped. Although you can't really fix that on a Vig. Maybe making it a bit taller would help? Anyway, I love the colors. Keep it up!
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Post by Wickedskillz on Sun Feb 06, 2011 1:46 am

This looks resonable, but maybe you should add a detail, or something that catches our attention. Like a cool barrel, or blaster effect. Interesting details like that compliment Vignettes, and to me this looks a little bland.


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Re: Padawan Training *REVISED EDITION*

Post by Troopa Daisy on Sun Feb 06, 2011 4:00 am

I like the idea of using the plate with technic holes in it to make the lightsaber "fly" into the wall. Smile The overall scene could use some more details though. In addition to the pattern on the walls, maybe controls or dials and maybe a square pattern on the floor instead of just the plain floor. Wink Smile
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Post by Green Tee on Sun Feb 06, 2011 3:24 pm

Thanks for all the great ideas guys! I'll try to incorporate them when I go back over this MOC.
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Post by Green Tee on Wed Feb 09, 2011 1:23 am

Small bump. Revised it, thanks for the feedback guys!
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