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TFU Level 2: Tie Factory.

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Post by C.J.Cutrone9 Tue Mar 22, 2011 12:02 am

Well I really do love this level because of the location. So I thought to myself why not build it? Took about 3-4 hours out of my day to find my favorite part from the level, rough draft it, build it, and then about 2o minuets to find the figs. Razz

Credit for the idea of using a backwards clonepilot's chest as Kota's soldier's torso.

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You would think that he would be happy that Starkiller isn't after him. Yet.

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Ouch. Maybe that is why he is unhappy. That looks painful.

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No figures.
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Post by [Not Applicable] Tue Mar 22, 2011 12:18 am

The bridge is a bit to simple IMO, Otherwise this looks nice. The walls are very nicely done.
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Post by Guest Tue Mar 22, 2011 12:22 am

Great job! I love the simplicity of it!
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Post by C.J.Cutrone9 Tue Mar 22, 2011 12:33 am

Thanks to both of you. And I thought the first reply was going to be something like. "You need to work on your lighting." Woops. Maybe I shouldn't have typed that. Watch the next comment be someone telling me that.
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Post by Troopa Daisy Tue Mar 22, 2011 12:34 am

A little too simple IMO. The walls and floors need something more instead of being so bland like stripes or greebles or some sort of color. The top of the walkway is also too simple if it's just going to be a block wall at least make the top studless. Wink
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Post by brickartist Tue Mar 22, 2011 2:05 am

Wayyy to simple. This doesn't say imperial in any way at all. I looks like something out of Kamino.
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Post by Rook Tue Mar 22, 2011 1:52 pm

Need to finish the top edge of the wall. All this nice studlessness everywhere and then BAM! EYE SORE! Wink
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Post by Fithboy Tue Mar 22, 2011 4:44 pm

It looks somewhat unfinished. You need to make something else inside it and finish the SNOT, then it would be a very nice MOC!
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Post by pyro of the 19th Tue Mar 22, 2011 5:15 pm

I'm going to echo people here and say more SNOT and more details. Wink
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Post by Noble-1337 Tue Mar 22, 2011 5:34 pm

Nice now put one of these in all of that empty space Razz


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Post by Rook Tue Mar 22, 2011 5:36 pm

Good point, a little something in the empty space a the bottom would be a nice touch.
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Post by Green Tee Tue Mar 22, 2011 8:44 pm

I think a little bit of greebling on the walls would make it look a little less plain.
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