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Alpha-Class V-17 (Dominator) Starfighter

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Alpha-Class V-17 (Dominator) Starfighter

Post by train 01 on Sun Apr 03, 2011 5:07 pm

So this was going to be my entry to the CORPS Battle Challenge, but I couldn't finish it before the deadline. Sad

Anyway, this is my Alpha-Class V-17 (Dominator) Starfighter, which is based off of many other Star Wars starfighters or at least that is what I think. I think it is pretty good, but not fantastic. So Enjoy. Smile







Sorry about the bad background in the photos, but Photoshop isn't really my thing.

Also, my first pictures using my new Flickr account. Link to Gallery

C&C welcomed. Smile
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Re: Alpha-Class V-17 (Dominator) Starfighter

Post by Typhoon on Sun Apr 03, 2011 10:01 pm

I see where you were trying to go here with this ship, an X-Wing layout design but it's quite rough around the wings and the wings themselves need some bulk and need to be a bit thicker; the cockpit just doesn't seem to fit the star fighter right. Maybe also come up with a cannon design and replace it over the TLC one. I'm not trying to rip your ship, just trying to point out some of the weak spots on this and with a little work this could be pretty descent. Good luck! Wow this thing looks
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Re: Alpha-Class V-17 (Dominator) Starfighter

Post by Noble-1337 on Mon Apr 04, 2011 3:28 pm

I'm guessing that this is a re-build of the recent ARC-170, if so, not bad Wink
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re:Alpha-Class V-17 (Dominator) Starfighter

Post by ZzoBro on Mon Apr 04, 2011 10:27 pm

This creation has many aspects that I do like. But I believe that it needs to be thicker throughout the fuselage and possibly make the engines a little bit smaller. But I very much like the proportions of it. It just needs a little bit more work than it will look even better. Roll Eyes
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Re: Alpha-Class V-17 (Dominator) Starfighter

Post by mlw209 on Tue Apr 05, 2011 11:53 pm

Nice color pattern, I love the Republic Red.
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Re: Alpha-Class V-17 (Dominator) Starfighter

Post by chriswilson333 on Wed Apr 06, 2011 2:23 pm

Yes, the red looks good, is it based on an x-wing becauuse at first glance it looks so much like one. :scratch:
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