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1945: Conquest of Germany

Post by Legion Dude on Thu May 19, 2011 3:44 pm












As allied forces push deeper into Europe, the German armies keep resisting. Many British bombardments have destroyed complete cities. But still, the Germans keep fighting. Here, German soldiers had been waiting in an ambush, trying to take some of the U.S. soldiers down with them. But they can not stop the advance of the allied forces.

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Re: 1945: Conquest of Germany

Post by Legion Dude on Fri May 20, 2011 11:40 am

No comments yet? Just posting cause I think you guys didn't notice it. More Sherman stuff coming soon!
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Re: 1945: Conquest of Germany

Post by MikeZulu on Fri May 20, 2011 12:36 pm

The MOC itself is okay. Decent design for the buildings but the road is a little too 'slap a whole heap of earth-coloured plates here.' And a lot of your pieces are not connected properly.

Your photography, on the other hand, is not okay: all of your photos are off-centred and poorly positioned, and as a result they cut out half of what your trying to show. Some are half-covered in your shadow. And when that happens it's harder for us to see what is going on in the scene you've constructed.
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Re: 1945: Conquest of Germany

Post by Legion Dude on Fri May 20, 2011 1:36 pm

Sorry about that Embarassed . I usually don't make such big MOC's. But on the other hand, you can still see the roof on the other pictures.
NOTE: I didn't photoshop this.
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Re: 1945: Conquest of Germany

Post by Halen on Fri May 20, 2011 1:58 pm

I'm with Zulu the photgraphy detracts from the moc. You also could really use a good overall shot, close ups are nice but it doesn't help without an overall.
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Re: 1945: Conquest of Germany

Post by Legion Dude on Fri May 20, 2011 3:46 pm

The pic on the top is the overall pic, but only after I broke it down, I realized that the room wasn't on the picture. Doh!
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Re: 1945: Conquest of Germany

Post by Captain Flak on Fri May 20, 2011 9:41 pm

253d legion guy wrote:The pic on the top is the overall pic, but only after I broke it down, I realized that the room wasn't on the picture. Doh!
Back on topic.

They are just trying to critique your building skills. One part of building a moc is the picture and that can be very important as well. Wow this thing looks
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Re: 1945: Conquest of Germany

Post by Legion Dude on Sat May 21, 2011 6:31 am

Correction: the building IS the MOC, and I am really sorry. Anything else?
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Re: 1945: Conquest of Germany

Post by Halen on Sat May 21, 2011 7:58 am

It's not really an overall unless you can see the backdrop on all sides.
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