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17th Assault Legion: Assault on Raxus Prime

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17th Assault Legion: Assault on Raxus Prime

Post by train 01 on Tue May 31, 2011 12:16 am

This is my entry for CCC Cycle II Training Challenge.

While on Raxus Prime, Commander Sabre and his troops are looking for Separatist forces when they run across a hostile Rodian Rebal scout. The scout opens fire on the commander, but starts to retreat when he sees the rest of Sabre's forces including Jedi Master Kron Udi.









Sorry if any of the pictures are bad, my tri-pod broke and it's really hard to get good photos now.

Link to Photostream

C&C would be nice. Smile

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Re: 17th Assault Legion: Assault on Raxus Prime

Post by CloneCommandoXion on Tue May 31, 2011 1:33 am

From what I can see it looks great, but please make the pics bigger, It's hard to see. Wink
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Re: 17th Assault Legion: Assault on Raxus Prime

Post by train 01 on Tue May 31, 2011 2:30 am

I'm still new to Flickr, so I can't figure out how to make them bigger. Thanks for the comment, though. Smile
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Re: 17th Assault Legion: Assault on Raxus Prime

Post by CloneCommandoXion on Tue May 31, 2011 5:09 am

I took a look at your photo's on Flickr and it looks like a pretty darn good moc. I love the detail crammed in there, although some areas are too filled in with pieces. Also I really like your commander, it seems to be an original idea, with the colour scheme and all. Which is always great to see since originality is crucial when it comes to your 'own' creation. Anyways overall I really like it, I'm surprised that other members haven't already commented. :scratch:
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Re: 17th Assault Legion: Assault on Raxus Prime

Post by Noble-1337 on Tue May 31, 2011 10:53 am

I see the baseplate or I'm gonna' just say that you piled a load of greebly bricks, stuck a few parts of models, and placed some clones! Razz
In all seriousness though, this is really good. Smile
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Re: 17th Assault Legion: Assault on Raxus Prime

Post by Legion Dude on Tue May 31, 2011 2:26 pm

Nice, you are starting to get better! It's almost greebleicious! Razz But just two things: "a hostile Rodian Rebal''? You mean rebEL, right? Secondly, the Rodian is blocking the face of the jedi. Why? Is the Jedi shy or something?
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Re: 17th Assault Legion: Assault on Raxus Prime

Post by train 01 on Tue May 31, 2011 8:20 pm

253d legion guy wrote:Nice, you are starting to get better! It's almost greebleicious! Razz But just two things: "a hostile Rodian Rebal''? You mean rebEL, right? Secondly, the Rodian is blocking the face of the jedi. Why? Is the Jedi shy or something?

Well you can blame Word for the rebel thing, it said nothing was wrong. And no my Jedi isn't shy, like I said, without my tripod, I can't get very good angles. Embarassed

Thanks for the comments! Smile
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Re: 17th Assault Legion: Assault on Raxus Prime

Post by Troopa Daisy on Fri Jun 03, 2011 3:04 am

This is a pretty good MOC but IMO some of the greebles look kind of just dumped on I think it would look better if the greebles were slightly more connected to each other if you get what I mean. Wink Smile
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Re: 17th Assault Legion: Assault on Raxus Prime

Post by cloneforesttrooper on Tue Jul 12, 2011 5:09 pm

Did you get the idea for the rodians from SWFU?

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