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Chapter 1 - Part 3: Streets of Despair

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Chapter 1 - Part 3: Streets of Despair

Post by Legion Dude on Sun Oct 23, 2011 4:51 pm



So I took this rookie and set off. My goal was to team up with Chad, who had to be in there somewhere. But no street, no roof was safe. Everywhere those damn brutes and turkeys.

"Chad, are you okay?" "I am, but some weren't as lucky." "Chad, get down, that's an order!" "Alright, but you should shut it too, sir! Those gorillas have perfect hearing, and 3 inches above your head stands a jackal!" "I know, what has happened to the privacy, huh?"

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Re: Chapter 1 - Part 3: Streets of Despair

Post by Typhoon on Sun Oct 23, 2011 5:13 pm

Wow, this is pretty amazing. I love the way you made a shattered window affect. The only thing I'm not to keen on is that round circle plate on the side of the building and the fact that you made 4 different colored brutes. 4 different colored brutes are ok but I just don't like the way those colors go together, maybe replace the red one with a white one? But hey, that's just my opinion. Over all you created an amazing build, keep up the good work. Thumbs up
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Re: Chapter 1 - Part 3: Streets of Despair

Post by Clonecommando007 on Sun Oct 23, 2011 11:53 pm

Broken building is well done! I really like your brick aliens, nice use of custom figure there too. Wink

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Re: Chapter 1 - Part 3: Streets of Despair

Post by Legion Dude on Mon Oct 24, 2011 7:25 am

Typhoon wrote:Wow, this is pretty amazing. I love the way you made a shattered window affect. The only thing I'm not to keen on is that round circle plate on the side of the building and the fact that you made 4 different colored brutes. 4 different colored brutes are ok but I just don't like the way those colors go together, maybe replace the red one with a white one? But hey, that's just my opinion. Over all you created an amazing build, keep up the good work. Thumbs up
I don't even know it there is a white one. This is just (from front to back) Chieftain, Ultra, Minor, General.
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Re: Chapter 1 - Part 3: Streets of Despair

Post by Typhoon on Wed Oct 26, 2011 11:16 pm

Legion Dude wrote:
Typhoon wrote:Wow, this is pretty amazing. I love the way you made a shattered window affect. The only thing I'm not to keen on is that round circle plate on the side of the building and the fact that you made 4 different colored brutes. 4 different colored brutes are ok but I just don't like the way those colors go together, maybe replace the red one with a white one? But hey, that's just my opinion. Over all you created an amazing build, keep up the good work. Thumbs up
I don't even know it there is a white one. This is just (from front to back) Chieftain, Ultra, Minor, General.

Oh. Well I don't play halo so if it was me I would just through in a white one and see if anyone noticed it was out of place. Razz
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Re: Chapter 1 - Part 3: Streets of Despair

Post by Troopa Daisy on Thu Oct 27, 2011 2:25 am

I'm actually not really liking the colour scheme of the building its really standing out. First off, you have the sidewalk area that's light bley and the first part of the building that's light bley but then all of a sudden it becomes white and then dark bley. Try to stick to one or two colours for the building and use a different one for the street it will look much better (for example dark bley street and light bley building). Wink Busted room though looks really good. Thumbs up
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