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F.A.T Albatros

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Post by George Kemper Fri Nov 25, 2011 6:46 pm

I finally got out of my builders block! I was looking for inspiration for somthing to build when I started looking at the "Dragon" and it hit me to build a smaller type of VTOL. I'm very pleased with it.
C&C is welcome.

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Post by jamesuniverse Fri Nov 25, 2011 7:02 pm

PLEASE greeble the propeller supports! i know something can be done! Nice cockpit though!
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Post by George Kemper Fri Nov 25, 2011 7:04 pm

jamesuniverse wrote:PLEASE greeble the propeller supports! i know something can be done! Nice cockpit though!

I thought about greebling it but I wanted the two areas to contrast other areas of the ship.
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Post by Wickedskillz Sat Nov 26, 2011 12:36 am

I'm liking the cockpit, and the air conducts behind it, but the propellor supports just look too plain to me. I would suggest either:
a) Making them angled
or
b) Using Greebles
But of course, that is just my opinion.
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Post by C.J.Cutrone9 Sat Nov 26, 2011 12:38 am

It has a nice look to it but the props are just a tad to long.
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Post by George Kemper Sat Nov 26, 2011 11:01 pm

jamesuniverse wrote:PLEASE greeble the propeller supports! i know something can be done! Nice cockpit though!
C.J.Cutrone9 wrote:It has a nice look to it but the props are just a tad to long.
Wickedskillz wrote:I'm liking the cockpit, and the air conducts behind it, but the propellor supports just look too plain to me. I would suggest either:
a) Making them angled
or
b) Using Greebles
But of course, that is just my opinion.

After looking it over, I have decided to re-do the rotors. I'll take your guys addvice and see what I come up with, thanks for the help!
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Post by Halen Sat Nov 26, 2011 11:09 pm

I would make the rotors much closer to the body, angle them and extend the length a few studs.
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Post by George Kemper Sun Nov 27, 2011 1:34 am

Commander Halen wrote:I would make the rotors much closer to the body, angle them and extend the length a few studs.
The new look that it is going to have is that I am taking of the rotors. The new look will have engines instead.
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