Clone Army Builders Guild
Welcome to the Clone Army Builders Guild!
You are welcome to browse as a Guest, but we invite
you to take advantage of more abilities by registering
for our website, and applying to the Guild later on.

Join the forum, it's quick and easy

Clone Army Builders Guild
Welcome to the Clone Army Builders Guild!
You are welcome to browse as a Guest, but we invite
you to take advantage of more abilities by registering
for our website, and applying to the Guild later on.
Clone Army Builders Guild
Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.

Samurai vs. Ninja.

4 posters

Go down

Samurai vs. Ninja. Empty Samurai vs. Ninja.

Post by C.J.Cutrone9 Fri Nov 25, 2011 10:19 pm

Well this was originally just a bridge, then I added the "bricks", then I added the tan, then decided it looked like a desert and added plants. And now you have what is before you. Please give me your feedback.

Samurai vs. Ninja. Img_0910

Samurai vs. Ninja. Img_0911

Samurai vs. Ninja. Img_0912

Samurai vs. Ninja. Img_0913
C.J.Cutrone9
C.J.Cutrone9
Council Member
Council Member

Age : 26
Location : Lousiana
Samurai vs. Ninja. Flag_u12

http://www.flickr.com/photos/79775094@N07/

Back to top Go down

Samurai vs. Ninja. Empty Re: Samurai vs. Ninja.

Post by Halen Fri Nov 25, 2011 10:39 pm

Could be alot better. Add a river or stream beneath the bridge and beef up the bank a little. Add a few green plates to the outsides where the foliage is at.
Halen
Halen
VIP Former Staff
VIP Former Staff

Age : 39
Location : Copley, Ohio
Samurai vs. Ninja. Flag_u12

Back to top Go down

Samurai vs. Ninja. Empty Re: Samurai vs. Ninja.

Post by Troopa Daisy Fri Nov 25, 2011 10:50 pm

Gotta admit that bridge thing is pretty smart. Thumbs up
Troopa Daisy
Troopa Daisy
Halo Kitty
Halo Kitty

Age : 28
Location : Vancouver, BC Canada. GO CANUCKS GO!
Samurai vs. Ninja. Flag_c10

http://www.flickr.com/photos/43597477@N02/

Back to top Go down

Samurai vs. Ninja. Empty Re: Samurai vs. Ninja.

Post by C.J.Cutrone9 Sat Nov 26, 2011 12:34 am

Commander Halen wrote:Could be alot better. Add a river or stream beneath the bridge and beef up the bank a little. Add a few green plates to the outsides where the foliage is at.

River is a maybe, green is a no. I want a sandy feel to it.
C.J.Cutrone9
C.J.Cutrone9
Council Member
Council Member

Age : 26
Location : Lousiana
Samurai vs. Ninja. Flag_u12

http://www.flickr.com/photos/79775094@N07/

Back to top Go down

Samurai vs. Ninja. Empty Re: Samurai vs. Ninja.

Post by RubbahBand Sun Nov 27, 2011 6:59 pm

Adding a few green plates on the edges would give a better feel to the scene. In my opinion it would make it look like a river/stream bank.
I think the scene would look much better with a brown bridge instead of a grey bridge with red highlights. If you are trying to get it so the bridge looks like it's made out of stone you are just going to have to ditch the red coloring and add some bley to it in assorted places giving a sort of cobble feel to it.
I would also feel that the bridge would be acceptable in Star Wars, but certainly not in old Japan where they enjoyed nature. Perhaps add a cherry blossom tree to represent the culture?

This is what I am basing my critique off of:
http://www.huntingtonbotanical.org/Japanese/lgpics/lookingback.jpg
RubbahBand
RubbahBand
Guild Member
Guild Member

Age : 27
Location : Haunting CABG
Samurai vs. Ninja. Flag_u12

http://www.flickr.com/photos/37639510@N08

Back to top Go down

Samurai vs. Ninja. Empty Re: Samurai vs. Ninja.

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

Back to top


 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum