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[CW] "... For the Civies. "

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[CW] "... For the Civies. "

Post by A on Sat Nov 26, 2011 8:13 am


Valqor Alpha: Mason City, outer city
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Gungan: Mesa swear, that wasn't m-

*Thwak*

Guard: Keep Moving!

Twi'lek: (muttering) ...these vat men walking around...

CT-5656: (com) Permission to engage?

CS-5289: (com) Denied; we have to look good for the civies.

CT-5656: (com) Yeah...

*Thwak*

Guard: I'm not going to repeat myself!

CT-5656: (com) ...For the civies.
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Sorry for the bad quality; I took these pictures without much preperation.

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Re: [CW] "... For the Civies. "

Post by Halen on Sat Nov 26, 2011 5:18 pm

Needs some help. On the right side the plate on the hinge seems out of place and unnecessary as do the red tiles below it. The wall the protocal droid is leaning against also fails in that the stripes are interupted by the dk grey plate, there are other ways to build that effect. The random cheese slopes are just silly and don't add to the little path the way a basic plate would.

This angle of photo is dreadfully boring and does not showcase the moc the same way this one does.



That is a much more intesting image becaue it is nicely framed out by the side walls. This is what you would want from the primary image you are using to represent your moc. The wall in the back is quite nice with the changes in color and the details you create with the clips.
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Re: [CW] "... For the Civies. "

Post by A on Sat Nov 26, 2011 9:52 pm

Commander Halen wrote:Needs some help. On the right side the plate on the hinge seems out of place and unnecessary as do the red tiles below it. The wall the protocal droid is leaning against also fails in that the stripes are interupted by the dk grey plate, there are other ways to build that effect. The random cheese slopes are just silly and don't add to the little path the way a basic plate would.

This angle of photo is dreadfully boring and does not showcase the moc the same way this one does.

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That is a much more intesting image becaue it is nicely framed out by the side walls. This is what you would want from the primary image you are using to represent your moc. The wall in the back is quite nice with the changes in color and the details you create with the clips.

The plate and red tiles are supposed to be a bed and half of a metal tent, but the edge of the vig cuts off the tent. As for the stripes, I wanted to use a plate on the side of the building to give it more of a gritty look, but it seemed plain. I can see what your saying about the gravel path, though, I just didn't have enough studs and tiles to do it well. Also, your right: my photography can use some work. Overall I see what your saying; my MOCs are usually rough around the edges, but practice makes perfect Wink .
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