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[Military] Race to the Chopper

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[Military] Race to the Chopper

Post by Clonecommando007 on Sun Jan 29, 2012 3:21 pm

A squad of ADU (Advanced Deployment Unit Wink ) troopers is being chased by rebel "Reclaimers" to their evac point. The area has been overrun by rebels and the peacekeeping force is exfiltrating, but the rebels aren't letting them go without a fight. They have put a machine gun turret on a truck and even a mounted a light machine gun in the door of a light sports plane, and the Special Forces have been chased in their Puma Fast Attack Vehicle all the way to the extract point, where the chopper and it's crew have also been engaged by rebels.

Will the Spec Ops in the Jeep make it into the chopper bed and lift off to safety, or will the rebels learn to shoot their rockets straight?


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Re: [Military] Race to the Chopper

Post by Typhoon on Sun Jan 29, 2012 6:47 pm

I personally think this MOC needs some touch ups.

1. The use of a SNOT road and a plane stud ground filling just doesn't work in my eyes. I suggest you maybe try to use SNOT for the rest of the ground.

2. The ground needs more texture. Maybe trees and little hills.

3. I think it would be smart to dust the bricks. They look a bit dusty and take away the appearance of the MOC.

With a few touch ups I think you'll be able to make this MOC a lot better. Keep building, I'd like to see more MOC's from you in the future.
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