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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by DeltaRecon226 on Wed Nov 28, 2012 11:55 am

That's funny you say that because I just found a crap ton of yellow pieces in my basement earlier. Good idea!
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by jamesuniverse on Wed Nov 28, 2012 3:46 pm

DeltaRecon226 wrote:That's funny you say that because I just found a crap ton of yellow pieces in my basement earlier. Good idea!
Only add one accent color since your using two bleys. This is a great start. Through some unique wings on this man! Its like a dart. Now make it a starFIGHTER! Wow this thing looks
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by Fithboy on Wed Nov 28, 2012 5:09 pm

I like it a lot. The sleek look is very good Thumbs up.

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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by DeltaRecon226 on Wed Nov 28, 2012 9:29 pm

I won't have anything up today as I'm pretty busy but I'll get it finished tomorrow. With wings, I'm hoping this thing is guild worthy.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by AlphaDelta052 on Thu Nov 29, 2012 1:18 am

Some sort of command center on Kamino. I know there is stuff to edit, but I can't think of anything. Please feel free to give any sort of constructive criticism.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by DeltaRecon226 on Thu Nov 29, 2012 2:42 am

Cool, I see you've been inspired by my Kamino vig. It's actually very good (especially the translucent parts), but what I would do is take away one of the crates, and like I did on mine, make the big control panel very unifrom and Kamino-esque, it's a little crowded. The photo is blurry, but in this case it looks cool because it captures the action. Remember to take the shot with a background poster though, or LEGO baseplates. 4.25/5. Good work, indeed.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by Dutch on Thu Nov 29, 2012 4:46 am

AlphaDelta052-Can I suggest adding in two curving (Use different slops to give it that look) white walls to give it a Kamino feel to it.

Maybe a pic will help?
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Post by C.J.Cutrone9 on Thu Nov 29, 2012 1:35 pm

Also Kaminoans are very OCD. Make ya'lls mocs like that.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by Fithboy on Thu Nov 29, 2012 5:25 pm

And most importantly, sort out your photography Wink!

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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by DeltaRecon226 on Thu Nov 29, 2012 11:12 pm

I haven't made alot of progress due to schoolwork Sad, but I have made a nice looking fin, and the cockpit can now fit a minifigure, unlike before. If possible, do any of you have experience SNOTing wings, because that is what's been making this build kinda hard. Also, I've decieded against implementing a third color because it looks better with the two tone.

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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by AlphaDelta052 on Fri Nov 30, 2012 10:44 pm

Custom Halo Hornet. Give any sort of constructive feedback.


Another 16 X 16 MOC.

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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by Fithboy on Sat Dec 01, 2012 7:16 am

The interior is nice, and I like the use of cockpits as the rotors, but I would like to see it more SNOT'd.

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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by AlphaDelta052 on Sat Dec 01, 2012 4:59 pm

Do you think I should SNOT the top part?
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by AlphaDelta052 on Sat Dec 01, 2012 9:29 pm

Hey guys just another update on the hornet.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by Halen on Sat Dec 01, 2012 10:12 pm

Do not double post. Please read the rules before posting again.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by DeltaRecon226 on Sat Dec 01, 2012 10:14 pm

I'm really liking your hornet, but two things. Firstly, take better pictures. The background is distracting and I have trouble seeing the details. Secondly, take out the yellow. Try to find another color that flows better with the moc, or add more yellow so that it doesn't look so random. Other than that, try to make it smoother and like fithboy said the part usage on the engines is great. Overall, pretty good. I like it alot.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by AlphaDelta052 on Sun Dec 02, 2012 3:38 am

Hey guys this is an update on my 32x32 MOC.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by Fithboy on Sun Dec 02, 2012 7:54 am

Wow! This is a great improvement on the photography! The front of the base looks really good, but I'm not too much a fan of the swamp area. The tree looks too blocky an, there isn't enough vegetation or water.

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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by AlphaDelta052 on Sun Dec 02, 2012 4:31 pm

Terrain update.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by DeltaRecon226 on Sun Dec 02, 2012 4:34 pm

The base is spot on, no work needed there, and the tree is very good. But you may need to texture the terrain more instead of just slapping on grass pieces.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by TheMissingPiece on Sun Dec 02, 2012 4:49 pm

If for some reason simply you can't do a lush environment due to parts restrictions, I suggest building over the baseplate to create an urban environment. All you need is a ton of bley tiles to create a street or the like.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by Misfit214 on Sun Dec 09, 2012 3:40 pm

This is one of my starter MOCs. Please leave comments and say what I should improve on.

Military Tank

Star Wars tank


This is a random star wars fighter that I made. Please comment on this.



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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by C.J.Cutrone9 on Sun Dec 09, 2012 4:49 pm

First, don't double post. Second, I can't see the pictures. Maybe something is wrong with me, but I think it is on your end.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by jamesuniverse on Sun Dec 09, 2012 10:28 pm

Ok. Get a photo hosting site. I suggest using Flickr. (The bold is a link) You are using a mail service and unless you want to give us your username and password on your mail account we can't see the pics. Razz Flickr is free too!
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by a43 on Fri Mar 08, 2013 2:05 am

hey guys, Hows it going? here's a New project that WILL be completed in real life one way or another Razz (not like the last one) Here it is!
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