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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by jamesuniverse on Fri Mar 08, 2013 4:11 am

Although I am not sure what it is, it looks ok. Keep going. I'd like to see more.

(Btw do you plan on buying that many brown flower stems? If so your insane... :p )
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Post by Fithboy on Fri Mar 08, 2013 7:45 am

If it's a war scene then it's looking good. Now it needs a tank.

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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by C.J.Cutrone9 on Fri Mar 08, 2013 2:40 pm

I suggest some more slopes and cheese clopes on the destroyed building, and more terrain on the areas where the road+structure is not.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by a43 on Fri Mar 08, 2013 10:16 pm

jamesuniverse wrote:Although I am not sure what it is, it looks ok. Keep going. I'd like to see more.

(Btw do you plan on buying that many brown flower stems? If so your insane... :p )

I am going for middle easterny look, and yes I am actually going to buy that many stems, remember, I'm the crazy one here Razz

Fithboy wrote:If it's a war scene then it's looking good. Now it needs a tank.

I was personally thinking Humvee, but that's not bad either I will add more to the opposite side of the road and thre slopes to the building rubble.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by jamesuniverse on Fri Mar 08, 2013 10:42 pm

So you plan on spending $50+ on stems and not on other parts? Doesn't make sense to me. Those things are $1+ each on BL and at high quantities they are even more expensive.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by a43 on Sat Mar 09, 2013 12:07 am

are they really a dollar a piece? seems dispraportional. I was thinking PAB if it still is functional...hmm ill have to look farther...
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by jamesuniverse on Sat Mar 09, 2013 12:20 am

a43 wrote:are they really a dollar a piece? seems dispraportional. I was thinking PAB if it still is functional...hmm ill have to look farther...

PAB sells green ones. Brown ones are from the cloud city set (and maybe another) and are very pricey and rare.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by a43 on Sat Mar 09, 2013 12:27 am

Sorry if this is considered a doube post but I have Progress on the opposite side, I added a wall and used what I think is the Rock Texture Technique.


Thanks James, alright then.. I will make a river to accommodate for The price of brown plastic Razz

Not a double post, but you missed a period and didn't capitalize your "S". Don't sweat it though, I fixed it. Smile -CJ
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by AlphaDelta052 on Sat Mar 09, 2013 2:38 am

That looks nice. A tank or humvee would look cool. Make sure you add figs in the real thing Wow this thing looks
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by C.J.Cutrone9 on Sat Mar 09, 2013 3:08 am

I think there is a little too much color variation in the wall, a little is good, but that is a little too much.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by a43 on Sat Mar 09, 2013 3:27 am

Not a double post, but you missed a period and didn't capitalize your "S". Don't sweat it though, I fixed it. -CJ

Silly grammer nazis Razz
Hummvee and figs will be included in final product.

Sorry man, I couldn't resist. Razz -CJ

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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by jamesuniverse on Sat Mar 09, 2013 4:53 am

a43 wrote:
Not a double post, but you missed a period and didn't capitalize your "S". Don't sweat it though, I fixed it. -CJ

silly grammer nazis Razz
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Not meant to go off topic, but C.J. Come on..... You type in liek dis in the guild :p

Try to get as many physical MOCs out there. Even small stuff can be made awesome.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by Captain Flak on Sat Mar 09, 2013 4:20 pm

It is looking good so far, I really like that technique on the wall.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by C.J.Cutrone9 on Sat Mar 09, 2013 5:04 pm

jamesuniverse wrote:
a43 wrote:
Not a double post, but you missed a period and didn't capitalize your "S". Don't sweat it though, I fixed it. -CJ

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Not meant to go off topic, but C.J. Come on..... You type in liek dis in the guild :p

Try to get as many physical MOCs out there. Even small stuff can be made awesome.

Which is why I told him not to sweat it. Razz If I had wanted to correct him, I would have said go read the rules again. But I didn't, I did it more as a playful nudge than anything. Smile
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by a43 on Sat Mar 09, 2013 7:53 pm

Ladies, no need for the hates! Razz Just jokes and fun. If he was going to correct me, he would have not put goofy emoticons in his "boss man green" corrections Razz
anyways, scene change! (an accommodation for the price of brown plastic)

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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by Captain Flak on Sat Mar 09, 2013 8:50 pm

It still needs more layers.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by a43 on Sat Mar 09, 2013 9:17 pm

Color? Height? :scratch:
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by jamesuniverse on Sat Mar 09, 2013 11:38 pm

a43 wrote: Color? Height? :scratch:

I bet he means layering. Check out some of my larger MOCs or Kashyyyk for large scale layering.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by Captain Flak on Sun Mar 10, 2013 7:40 pm

jamesuniverse wrote:
a43 wrote: Color? Height? :scratch:

I bet he means layering. Check out some of my larger MOCs or Kashyyyk for large scale layering.
Both. But more height than coloring.
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Post by C.J.Cutrone9 on Mon Mar 11, 2013 12:42 am

Definitely more height difference.
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