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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by C.J.Cutrone9 on Sun Aug 19, 2012 3:33 pm

Firstly, that road is <3.

Second, add some control panels in the observation room up top. On the bottom have some pipes and stuff. Smile

Do that and I think you;d have a pretty good MOC for 1 of your 3. Smile
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Post by a43 on Sun Aug 19, 2012 6:48 pm

all right cool. I"ll work on that this afternoon Smile

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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by jamesuniverse on Sat Aug 25, 2012 7:02 pm

a43 wrote:OK then i'm back with my next one I wont need as much help on this one.. thank you for all of those who helped!

my question of the day is.. whats a good dusty dirt road color for a middle east type *hint* desert road?
Tan with a few 1x2/1x1 Dark tan plates?
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by a43 on Sat Aug 25, 2012 10:45 pm

never mind.. I answered my own question Doh! anyways.. I will have an update some time next week!
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by a43 on Sun Sep 02, 2012 11:40 pm

alrighty.. about 6 hours later I have 3 vinegettes.. true ones this time.. that could pretty much fit in to any place in the universe. see if you can find the one thats movie based Smile




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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by C.J.Cutrone9 on Mon Sep 03, 2012 1:37 pm

Not to be rude... But it looks like you just slightly modded each vig.:l
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by a43 on Mon Sep 03, 2012 3:54 pm

I also noticed that after posting.. Embarassed the one with the clones and the one with the commandos look pretty similar Blue \'n\' the Face but still what do you think of the compound section item?
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by C.J.Cutrone9 on Mon Sep 03, 2012 4:06 pm

Well.. I think it is still very plain.... Maybe take away some of the larger plants, add a few hills, and then some small stalk pieces. Smile
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by a43 on Wed Sep 05, 2012 4:10 am

thanks C.J for your input.. but as a builder on a budget and a mom that's uptight about tech.. it's complicated for a bricklink order conversation to get through.. grrr.... any ways a made a larger version of the "grass lands" MOCs



(Yes I know the white glare is distracting.. I'll take a new set of shots at a different time of day) mid day sun sucks in my kitchen)
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by C.J.Cutrone9 on Wed Sep 05, 2012 1:51 pm

I know you said you were on a budget but..... IS there any LEGO store near you?
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by jamesuniverse on Wed Sep 05, 2012 10:12 pm

OK. People commonly put "rubbish" or "debris" in vignettes like these. IMO unless your doing Raxus Prime I suggest staying away from things like that. I know budget can be hard, but if you can get these added.

MORE green plates to layer the ground so the ground isn't perfectly flat.

Compress the plants and make a path possible to the outside of a building such as a outpost/base door. Side door, wall, whatever, but something other than land since you don't have enough plants to make this full.

Less clones. 2-3 more droids. Too many clones in this MOC.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by Captain Flak on Wed Sep 05, 2012 11:42 pm

jamesuniverse wrote:OK. People commonly put "rubbish" or "debris" in vignettes like these. IMO unless your doing Raxus Prime I suggest staying away from things like that. I know budget can be hard, but if you can get these added.

MORE green plates to layer the ground so the ground isn't perfectly flat.

Compress the plants and make a path possible to the outside of a building such as a outpost/base door. Side door, wall, whatever, but something other than land since you don't have enough plants to make this full.

Less clones. 2-3 more droids. Too many clones in this MOC.

I would really put emphasis on the green plates to layer the ground. That its self adds a lot to a good MOC. Wink
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by a43 on Thu Sep 06, 2012 2:26 am

C.J.Cutrone9 wrote:I know you said you were on a budget but..... IS there any LEGO store near you?

San Jose at the mall.. i think that they had the stalk pieces there.. some thing to look for

PM sent. -R
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by C.J.Cutrone9 on Thu Sep 06, 2012 3:09 pm

cough,don'tdoublepost

Do they have any green 1x1,2x2 or any small green plates there?
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by a43 on Fri Sep 07, 2012 12:45 am

C.J.Cutrone9 wrote:cough,don'tdoublepost

Do they have any green 1x1,2x2 or any small green plates there?

they might, but I have a lot of those I actually used the layering technique, can't really tell for the images that I posted here though.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by a43 on Fri Sep 07, 2012 1:52 am

I'm getting pretty good at this taking advice thingy Smile ..next update away!

(now that I look at it it looks a lot better with the plates)


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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by Captain Flak on Fri Sep 07, 2012 2:00 am

Very nice, still a little plain but much better. Next step is to get some good rocks on the ground.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by Fithboy on Fri Sep 07, 2012 7:08 am

And get a better backdrop.

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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by a43 on Sun Sep 09, 2012 10:07 pm

I'm working on it, I'm working on it....
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by jamesuniverse on Sun Sep 09, 2012 11:18 pm

a43 wrote: I'm working on it, I'm working on it....

Cheap idea? Craft store. Poster board. 50 cents.
Even cheaper!?!?! Sheet for bedding.
EVEN CHEAPER!? Plain wall with plain floor.

Ok Sorry. I can't get much cheaper...
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by a43 on Wed Sep 12, 2012 12:44 am

really?! not hard to figure that out genius Mad all I meant was that I pay for everything not cause I dont have money.. I just put money into other things..
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by jamesuniverse on Wed Sep 12, 2012 1:56 am

a43 wrote:really?! not hard to figure that out genius Mad all I meant was that I pay for everything not cause I dont have money.. I just put money into other things..

So why cant you have a better backdrop?
My point is still valid.
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by a43 on Wed Sep 12, 2012 2:21 am

I know this..like I said before i'm working on it, I know it needs to be changed..
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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by DeltaRecon226 on Sun Nov 25, 2012 7:06 pm

Okay, here's my attempt at a simple MOC after a long Lego hiatus. I intend to integrate some of it into a larger vignette sometime, but here it is, barrage me with constructive criticism Laughing!

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Re: MOC Feedback for New Members

Post by TheMissingPiece on Sun Nov 25, 2012 8:35 pm

Fixed.
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