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Duel on the Docks

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Duel on the Docks

Post by Fithboy on Wed Jun 13, 2012 6:55 am

As Jonny Thunder tries to make a quick getaway on his makeshift raft Dr. Sinister tries to stop him!



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Re: Duel on the Docks

Post by Jedi Joe on Fri Jun 15, 2012 6:32 pm

I really loved that you used Johnny Thunder, but the vig itself is rather plain. If you have trans pieces, they'd work nice to texture the water a bit. It's cute overall though.
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Post by herpderpterp1 on Tue Jun 26, 2012 12:35 am

Dr. Sinister can't shoot at point blank range....
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Re: Duel on the Docks

Post by C.J.Cutrone9 on Tue Jun 26, 2012 4:05 pm

Meh...
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Re: Duel on the Docks

Post by Rook on Tue Jun 26, 2012 6:36 pm

Really all you got is "meh". Give him some better feedback than that! Roll Eyes Wink

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Re: Duel on the Docks

Post by C.J.Cutrone9 on Wed Jun 27, 2012 6:08 pm

Okay then..

MOC is bland, water is pretty basic, some tiles/ snot would have been much better.

I don't like tiled terrain very much, IMO that should be saved for man/alien made things as well as water/lava.

Background could use some work.

The white "foam" is ok, not a very good preresentation for it though.
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