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1st legion base!

Post by commander nick on Fri Jul 18, 2008 10:19 pm



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Post by Delta 77-Ponce on Fri Jul 18, 2008 10:19 pm

Says that it isnt public.
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RE: 1st legion clone base

Post by commander nick on Fri Jul 18, 2008 10:26 pm

Does anyone no how to make it public.
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Post by Bly on Fri Jul 18, 2008 10:29 pm

You'll just have to wait I'm afraid. It'll be moderated and then will be public.
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Re: 1st legion base!

Post by Alpha on Fri Jul 18, 2008 11:19 pm

Can you give us a deeplink then?

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RE: 1st legion clone base

Post by commander nick on Fri Jul 18, 2008 11:28 pm

How do you post a deeplink?
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Re: 1st legion base!

Post by Alpha on Fri Jul 18, 2008 11:30 pm

You go into one picture, then you click on it untill you cant click anymore. Use that URL Wink

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Re: !st Legion base

Post by Mike on Fri Jul 18, 2008 11:39 pm

It's pretty good i must say but a few things. 1- use maybe 3 colors for the wall. 2- add more to the middle its just blank. 3- Take more pictures. Try and look at mine it's not perfect but it's ok.
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Post by commander nick on Fri Jul 18, 2008 11:47 pm

Ya,for one thing mine is like huge and yours is outpost size mike
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Re: 1st legion base!

Post by Mike on Fri Jul 18, 2008 11:50 pm

commander nick wrote:Ya,for one thing mine is like huge and yours is outpost size mike

You should put baseplates in put computers, speeder entrances ect. and that would make it good.
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RE: 1st legion clone base

Post by commander nick on Fri Jul 18, 2008 11:55 pm

the short wall is a gate and yes it does open and the middle is a hanger.
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Re: 1st legion base!

Post by astoriabluelegos on Sat Jul 19, 2008 1:39 am

commander nick wrote:the short wall is a gate and yes it does open and the middle is a hanger.

Looks pretty good, however I might try for a little better-coloration. However I do like all the space you've got for storing vehicles and troops in there. Wink Blue Arc
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RE: 1st legion clone base

Post by commander nick on Sat Jul 19, 2008 1:45 am

This is sorta my legion thread two cause I've got my legion in the base two.
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Re: 1st legion base!

Post by Axel on Sat Jul 19, 2008 3:17 am

Looks pretty empty to me...and too colourful for clone troopers. Take my advice; take it down, and rebuild a smaller base with an actual interior. Right now it's just several walls put together; hardly a good base.
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Re: 1st legion base!

Post by Rook on Sat Jul 19, 2008 4:35 am

Ouch! Look at other "builders" please. I'm really sorry but this too basic.

PS: The "!st" Legion? Not going to work. The "Lnd", The "7st", The Gth, The "114rd"?

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RE: 1st legion clone base

Post by commander nick on Sat Jul 19, 2008 4:41 am

1st legion ,sorry about that.
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Re: 1st legion base!

Post by Rook on Sat Jul 19, 2008 4:44 am

Edit it then. That's what it's there for.

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Re: 1st legion base!

Post by DarthPineapple on Sat Jul 19, 2008 8:47 am

Well, waht to say. It needs a LOT of work but the basis is good.

First of all, I understand you like to make it big, but I would make it smaller for just 2 reasons:

1. You don't have enough plates for the floor and buildings now.
2.It's just too big for only thet few clones that are in.

And the, Try to stick yellow with yellow, red with red and so on.

I also advise you to read Rook's Guide.
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Re: 1st legion base!

Post by -Aki- on Sat Jul 19, 2008 8:50 am

DarthPineapple wrote:Well, waht to say. It needs a LOT of work but the basis is good.

First of all, I understand you like to make it big, but I would make it smaller for just 2 reasons:

1. You don't have enough plates for the floor and buildings now.
2.It's just too big for only thet few clones that are in.

And the, Try to stick yellow with yellow, red with red and so on.

I also advise you to read Rook's Guide.

I agree. It needs some work.
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Re: 1st legion base!

Post by Uberlag on Sat Jul 19, 2008 8:53 am

I might get yelled at for this, but here I go:
When I look at this, I see a big fence, no detail or anything, just a fence, because the truth is, that all it is.
Put in a baseplate or 2, this thing could be airstriked into oblivion, give it more defense.
Spend more than 5 minutes building a MOC.
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Re: 1st legion base!

Post by Zepher on Sat Jul 19, 2008 9:50 pm

I like the idea of the front area alot, but it needs to be redone. Less colors. The rest should be taken down and redone. I like the entry way the best.
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