WIP Ambush on Kashyyyk
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C.J.Cutrone9
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AlphaDelta052
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WIP Ambush on Kashyyyk
I decided to extent my base. I added more terrain and a small troop bay/loading dock. I have to clean up the new room, though aside from that I think it is good. Any sort of criticism is always welcome.
AlphaDelta052- Guild Member
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Not bad, the tree is meh, there a few good layers. The base its self is decent, also the water isn't bad.
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Needs more leaves. I give my advice one piece at a time now, so if you want the next piece, fix that.
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I'd change the blue colors on the cannon to red or dark red to tie in with the red color on the roof.
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The base itself looks great, but this is Kashyyyk so it needs more folliage.
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Thanks for all of the comments. I will definitely make the improvements you guys suggested.
AlphaDelta052- Guild Member
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Personally, I don't have too much of a problem with the terrain. It needs a little work, but overall not bad. But why in the back of the photo is there some random wall which the roof seems not to connect with?
DeltaRecon226- Guild Member
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This is good.Dutch wrote:I'd change the blue colors on the cannon to red or dark red to tie in with the red color on the roof.
Also Kashyyyk isn't a forest. It's a Jungle. Think about your plants that way.
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There is a small docking bay/troop bay which I plan to put a roof on.DeltaRecon226 wrote:Personally, I don't have too much of a problem with the terrain. It needs a little work, but overall not bad. But why in the back of the photo is there some random wall which the roof seems not to connect with?
AlphaDelta052- Guild Member
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DeltaRecon226- Guild Member
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Tanks. Just kidding, thank you!
AlphaDelta052- Guild Member
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