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WIP Ambush on Kashyyyk

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Post by AlphaDelta052 Fri Dec 14, 2012 11:37 pm

I decided to extent my base. I added more terrain and a small troop bay/loading dock. I have to clean up the new room, though aside from that I think it is good. Any sort of criticism is always welcome.
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Post by Captain Flak Sat Dec 15, 2012 1:57 am

Not bad, the tree is meh, there a few good layers. The base its self is decent, also the water isn't bad.
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Post by C.J.Cutrone9 Sat Dec 15, 2012 4:35 am

Needs more leaves. I give my advice one piece at a time now, so if you want the next piece, fix that. Razz
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Post by Dutch Sat Dec 15, 2012 5:02 am

I'd change the blue colors on the cannon to red or dark red to tie in with the red color on the roof.
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Post by Fithboy Sat Dec 15, 2012 6:12 am

The base itself looks great, but this is Kashyyyk so it needs more folliage.
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Post by AlphaDelta052 Sat Dec 15, 2012 4:20 pm

Thanks for all of the comments. I will definitely make the improvements you guys suggested.
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Post by DeltaRecon226 Sun Dec 16, 2012 10:15 pm

Personally, I don't have too much of a problem with the terrain. It needs a little work, but overall not bad. But why in the back of the photo is there some random wall which the roof seems not to connect with?
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Post by jamesuniverse Mon Dec 17, 2012 4:07 am

Dutch wrote:I'd change the blue colors on the cannon to red or dark red to tie in with the red color on the roof.
This is good.

Also Kashyyyk isn't a forest. It's a Jungle. Think about your plants that way.
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Post by AlphaDelta052 Mon Dec 17, 2012 11:30 am

DeltaRecon226 wrote:Personally, I don't have too much of a problem with the terrain. It needs a little work, but overall not bad. But why in the back of the photo is there some random wall which the roof seems not to connect with?
There is a small docking bay/troop bay which I plan to put a roof on.
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Post by DeltaRecon226 Mon Dec 17, 2012 1:48 pm

Cool!
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Post by AlphaDelta052 Tue Dec 18, 2012 11:49 am

Tanks. Just kidding, thank you!
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