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[CW] Duel on Tarnasis

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[CW] Duel on Tarnasis

Post by Geoff Reid on Sun Jan 27, 2013 4:13 am

The “Duel on Tarnasis” is between the much feared Crimson Commando Droid & Commander Blaxx. The Crimson Commando Droid has survived hundreds of battles against the Clones & has the highest kill ratio; this Commando Droid uses a Crimson coloured S.T.A.P. to intimidate his foes. Commander Blaxx has been sent on special mission to Tarnasis to destroy this menace once & for all.











The planet of Tarnasis is made entirely of tar & the only refuge is the floating vegetation that is impervious to the toxic acids of the tar, but watch out there are deadly Tarvines which spit acid at anything that gets to close.

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Re: [CW] Duel on Tarnasis

Post by C.J.Cutrone9 on Sun Jan 27, 2013 2:52 pm

Hmmm... Needs some work. The terrain is really flat. I understand that it is for the figs but still.
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Re: [CW] Duel on Tarnasis

Post by Fithboy on Sun Jan 27, 2013 5:33 pm

The figures are awesome, but the vig is a little too repetitive and un-detailed.

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Re: [CW] Duel on Tarnasis

Post by Captain Flak on Mon Jan 28, 2013 3:24 am

fithboy wrote:The figures are awesome, but the vig is a little too repetitive and un-detailed.
I agree, it almost seems like you are trying out newer elements?
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Re: [CW] Duel on Tarnasis

Post by Dutch on Mon Jan 28, 2013 4:24 pm

This moc could use some work. Perhaps add in small lakes of tar using smooth titles or the snot technique. Add in some small hills and valleys. I'd also remove the whips it doesn't look right to me.
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Re: [CW] Duel on Tarnasis

Post by Geoff Reid on Fri Feb 01, 2013 1:37 am

Thanks for your comments & input, originally this was just a backdrop for minifig display, but I thought I would give the MOC a back story. I probably should have added more detail as you guys have pointed out, anyway we learn from our mistakes.

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