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Post by commander nick Mon Jul 21, 2008 9:14 pm

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enjoy peoples everyone.

tell me your favorite.

YOU NEED TO WORK ON YOUR POSTS!
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Post by -Aki- Mon Jul 21, 2008 9:17 pm

My computer won't allow it.
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Post by Alpha Mon Jul 21, 2008 9:20 pm

Not public yet, post a deeplink please.
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Post by legorevolution Mon Jul 21, 2008 10:28 pm

Nick, good first try however you can vastly improve upon this. Right now it's pretty plain (colorwise) so throw some more colors in there, or if you're trying to stick with the snow make it light bley and white. Boxy! Way boxy, put some angles in there to make it more appealing to the viewer. I liked the idea of the upside down wing pieces, but right now they're pretty distracting. Beef up those side guns a little so we can have some defense for our troopers! Maybe attempt some greebling if you want. Now get to work! Smile
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Post by Zepher Mon Jul 21, 2008 10:30 pm

You're showing great improvement. The second one is really nice compared to therest of your work! Lego REvo hit the nail on the head, not much more to add.
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Post by commander nick Mon Jul 21, 2008 11:30 pm

1.its mountain and snow
2.wicth one is the second the bigger one or the smaller one?
3.Thanks for the comment legorev I just aded the big guns they look awsome I also aded the curves and vertical pices
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Post by legorevolution Mon Jul 21, 2008 11:46 pm

commander nick wrote:1.its mountain and snow
2.wicth one is the second the bigger one or the smaller one?
3.Thanks for the comment legorev I just aded the big guns they look awsome I also aded the curves and vertical pices

Perfect! Once you feel it's necessary for further review don't hesitate to post.
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Post by Brandon9 Tue Jul 22, 2008 12:26 am

Not public for me yet. Sad But I bet its really cool! Smile Fordo Yo!
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Post by commander nick Tue Jul 22, 2008 12:26 am

Update new v.2 imobilizer

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probly aint public yet sorry
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Post by Comrade Faie Tue Jul 22, 2008 12:33 am

Not public yet Nick, deeplink please. Fordo Yo!
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Post by commander nick Tue Jul 22, 2008 4:53 am

deeplink yayywww.brickshelf.com/gallery/nick5555656565/cloner/img00141.jpg
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Post by DarthPineapple Tue Jul 22, 2008 7:59 am

Too much colors.
Too blocky.
Too weird.

I advise you read my guide. Roll Eyes
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Post by Zepher Tue Jul 22, 2008 2:29 pm

I think it's coming along nicly, though there are a few odd colors here and there. It's getting much more slopey. Try to make things symetrical though, if you have a white engine on one side, have a white engine on the other aswell.
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Post by Rook Tue Jul 22, 2008 3:37 pm

It's not amazing but it does look like ship. Here' my input so far.

Starting from the outside at 9 o'clock going clock wise in a closing spiral: 2 very different gun tips (not a big issue), place wedge on wings to avoid harsh corners (this the main issue with the MOC), 2 types of engines and they are facing two different directions, neon orange when gun tip is blue? (I'd use grey instead of orange), front guns have no coloring but the side ones do? why?, the big chain gun looks weird with bright yellow add some gun tips to draw your eye away from the yellow, and the rest are all very harsh square corners you should use slopes. Overall, think of a fighter jet, not many right angles.

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Post by -Aki- Tue Jul 22, 2008 4:52 pm

Well said Rook. I like the pilot. Can we see a pic of him outside? Did you use your method for him?
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Post by commander nick Tue Jul 22, 2008 9:14 pm

click me theres the piolt pic you requsted aki.

Please use proper spelling, grammar, capitalization, & punctuation. Thanks. ADMIN
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Post by -Aki- Tue Jul 22, 2008 9:15 pm

commander nick wrote:click me theres the piolt pic you requsted aki.

Pretty good! Is this done using your freezer teqnique?

BTW, sorry for spamming your site Sad.

I have a idea for a name for a new one: lego clone wars.
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Post by astoriabluelegos Tue Jul 22, 2008 9:28 pm

Nice that Pilot looks pretty good! I'd listen to Rooks advice, read DP's guide, and you should have a fairly decent ship there. Wink Blue Arc
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Post by Axel Wed Jul 23, 2008 9:23 am

Reduce the number of studs by using more slopes and add some greebles. The colour scheme could be improved; instead of going for uniformality, go camoflauge. Put in some light bley and white parts so that it 'blends' with snowy terrain.
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Post by Bly Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:11 pm

They are both a bit blocky but definitely a good start. Smile I think that the second one is better though.
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