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Yujla recon-Discovery

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Post by -Aki- Sat Sep 20, 2008 8:22 pm

story: after falling back to the main camp, the 101st legion prepares for a retreat. However, they cannot leave for a few days because their transport engines have been clogged with pollen from the plants. During a recon mission with the recovered 4th member of squad 101, longshot, Callum (His topic coming soon) discoverers a secret separatist base...

Callum: SBD. I'll take him. Longshot: No! That's suicide! But as soon as the words leave his mouth, callum prepares to charge

Callum charges, but...

...he falls down a trapdoor. Longshot: Sithspit!

Callum: My head...

At the same time, Longshot confronts the SBD. Longshot: Bring it fierfiek!

Callum: I missed breakfast thanks to you guys, so I will have to open a few tin cans! Heh, that pun was good...

Longshot, armed with his heavy blaster, manages to quickly gun down the droid

Longshot: How you doing down there ki-WOW S***! Callum uses a force jump int the air and stabs the droid in the head. Callum: YAARRG!

Callum: It appears that we have discovered the entrance to a droid base! No wonder no bases showed up on radar! Longshot: Nice. Now I say that we alert the others and-

Callum: No! This is my chance to impress the jedi so I can become a knight! Callum runs off into one of the corridoors. Longshot climbs down the ladder. Longshot: I just know that this guy is going to be the death of me...


Cut, print, and thats a wrap! Quite a climb up from my old one, eh?

Comments welcome!
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Post by Commander Mongoose Sat Sep 20, 2008 8:25 pm

I really like it! great story, but the place it too small. ITS A TRAP!
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Post by Bly Sat Sep 20, 2008 10:49 pm

great story! The scenery has grown on me a lot now. Good job Aki. Smile
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