704th Battle over Metalorn

Story: After the Fireflight went into orbit, the 604th and the 704th engaged in combat with the CIS. Will they capture Grievous?

























Author's Note

All the GIMP effects were done by Thunder-blade. 50% of the credit goes to him. This is one of my silent Story Mocs. I'm not going to add a P II, as I am into Kyrt. Once again, thanks to T-b.

Looks pretty good! Nice use of GIMP i wish i were that good. Congrats Alpha and Blade.\

I really like it! It has awesome SFX!

Seriously though, this is a pretty good battle. It was fun working on it!

I really liked the special effects and how you made a mini space battle. What I would've liked to see more of are smaller starfighter ships in the surrounding area of space.

Some of the explosions need work.... the smoke effects I could so do better .

But I love the minis and the laser fire! I'm still not content with my technique yet...

That was well cool! I loved all those ships!

The last pic is cool! great work both of you!

This is really nice! I like the diamond Republic Ships, but the firefighter isn't all that good. I like the spacebattle effects and the enlarged starfighters. Nice work!

Updated, thanks again to T-b.

Once again... great work I really like the poses of the starships Alpha!

Off topic: If any one need some help with some SFX, just PM me!