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The Viper

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Post by Thunder-blade Sat Sep 06, 2008 4:35 am

The Viper is Thunder-blade's small one-manned starfighter. He uses it during stealth missions and reconnaissance.
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The Viper was also used by Typho when he was a Jedi, though it was frowned upon by the Council.

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Post by DarthPineapple Sat Sep 06, 2008 6:48 am

I don't like the gaps in here, maybe you should fill them up. Smile
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Post by Axel Sat Sep 06, 2008 6:51 am

Add 1x1 cones for missiles, maybe?
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Post by J4ke Sat Sep 06, 2008 10:41 am

This is a very unusual-loooking ship, and I like it. As others have said, add details to those guns and sort out those underwing vents somehow. I know the effect you were trying to create, but it doesn't come off very well. Also, the wings on this are too studly. Add tiles for colour emphasis, not plates. Finally, change the cockpit colour from red. It doesn't match with the rest of the ship at all.

The front prongs are great, but my only niggle there is that the embedded lights should be square plates, not circles.
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Post by Thunder-blade Sat Sep 06, 2008 7:21 pm

Hmmm....I kinda like my swoop intakes, I don't know If I want to change them....But you guys are right, I'll see what I can do....
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Post by astoriabluelegos Sat Sep 06, 2008 7:26 pm

I dunno, I kinda like it the way it IS, the intakes look good, and the overall look is good too, I like the blue black and red, including the cockpit. If it were me, I probably wouldn't change ANYTHING... Wink Blue Arc
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Post by Thunder-blade Sat Sep 06, 2008 7:29 pm

That's kinda how I fell ABL (can I call you that?) but I should mod it....who am I to go against popular opinion? Smile
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Post by astoriabluelegos Sat Sep 06, 2008 7:46 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:That's kinda how I fell ABL (can I call you that?) but I should mod it....who am I to go against popular opinion? Smile

Sure, ABL is a LOT shorter! Razz I STILL say it's PERFECT as it IS, but I'm obviously out numbered... Wink Blue Arc
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Post by Clonecommando007 Sat Sep 06, 2008 8:10 pm

I like how you've included blue in most of your creations, it gives a great feeling for your legion. Nice work!
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Post by Thunder-blade Sat Sep 06, 2008 8:15 pm

Well CC, it is mt favorite color....kinda like how Uberlag ussually has green in his MOCs.... Smile
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