The Viper
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DarthPineapple
Thunder-blade
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The Viper
The Viper is Thunder-blade's small one-manned starfighter. He uses it during stealth missions and reconnaissance.
The Viper was also used by Typho when he was a Jedi, though it was frowned upon by the Council.
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The Viper was also used by Typho when he was a Jedi, though it was frowned upon by the Council.
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Re: The Viper
I don't like the gaps in here, maybe you should fill them up.
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 29
Location : The Netherlands
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This is a very unusual-loooking ship, and I like it. As others have said, add details to those guns and sort out those underwing vents somehow. I know the effect you were trying to create, but it doesn't come off very well. Also, the wings on this are too studly. Add tiles for colour emphasis, not plates. Finally, change the cockpit colour from red. It doesn't match with the rest of the ship at all.
The front prongs are great, but my only niggle there is that the embedded lights should be square plates, not circles.
The front prongs are great, but my only niggle there is that the embedded lights should be square plates, not circles.
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Hmmm....I kinda like my swoop intakes, I don't know If I want to change them....But you guys are right, I'll see what I can do....
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I dunno, I kinda like it the way it IS, the intakes look good, and the overall look is good too, I like the blue black and red, including the cockpit. If it were me, I probably wouldn't change ANYTHING...
astoriabluelegos- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 34
Location : Oregon
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That's kinda how I fell ABL (can I call you that?) but I should mod it....who am I to go against popular opinion?
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Thunder-blade wrote:That's kinda how I fell ABL (can I call you that?) but I should mod it....who am I to go against popular opinion?
Sure, ABL is a LOT shorter! I STILL say it's PERFECT as it IS, but I'm obviously out numbered...
astoriabluelegos- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 34
Location : Oregon
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I like how you've included blue in most of your creations, it gives a great feeling for your legion. Nice work!
Clonecommando007- Kinda like a UFO
- Location : Ohio
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Well CC, it is mt favorite color....kinda like how Uberlag ussually has green in his MOCs....
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