Coruscant Terrorist Attack

The agent for Vertigo, Magnus Grayeyes, and his assassin droids crash into a bridge on Coruscant. Magnus crashes through a window onto the destoyed catwalk. Unbeknownst to them, the Padawan Elik is below, trying to reach a channel on his comlink.

The street was undergoing construction at the time of the attack. Warning sign reads 'Danger: Street Work'.

Close up of catwalk.

Elik and the civilians.

Magnus Grayeyes and his assassin droids. Magnus is sophisticated on the outside, but is extremely deranged on the inside, ready to kill anyone with his vibroax and dagger.

Gaping hole in the catwalk.

Those pictures... 0.o

Anyways, it's not bad, but I'm surprised you didn't through infected civillians and Phase 2 Clone Troopers on it, and enter it in my Contest. Nah, it just needs some detail, but it's pretty nice. Some tiles, fire, more rubble, and it'll be good.

Alpha wrote:Those pictures... 0.o

Anyways, it's not bad, but I'm surprised you didn't through infected civillians and Phase 2 Clone Troopers on it, and enter it in my Contest. Nah, it just needs some detail, but it's pretty nice. Some tiles, fire, more rubble, and it'll be good.

Thanks! I really do need real lighting; the current stuff won't come close to cutting it.
As for your contest, I would enter it, but I built it way before I even knew the contest existed.

Very nice. I like the shattered glass technique , and the attention to detail is amazing. The assassin droid speeder going through the wall is a very nice touch as well.

Cool! It looks pretty well done and I like the speeder going through the wall. Though more detail is needed is a pretty good overall.

It's not "pretty well done". He's trying to simulate damage by putting random bricks onto his baseplates. He's got no detail, no architectural features, nothing that's really indicative of a good builder. The top of the walls make me bite my teeth in anger, and the floor plan of these rooms are abominable. The metal grate doesn't even look right. There should be some support to it, and maybe even a nice brick column to flush out the ends. You shouldn't just smack it on and call it a wall.


I'm extremely unimpressed.

Sialboats wrote:It's not "pretty well done". He's trying to simulate damage by putting random bricks onto his baseplates. He's got no detail, no architectural features, nothing that's really indicative of a good builder. The top of the walls make me bite my teeth in anger, and the floor plan of these rooms are abominable. The metal grate doesn't even look right. There should be some support to it, and maybe even a nice brick column to flush out the ends. You shouldn't just smack it on and call it a wall.


I'm extremely unimpressed.

Yes, I wholeheartedly agree with you.

It's ok, but it doesn't look like Coruscant at all.