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Post by Darman Sun Jul 19, 2009 1:31 am

A little while ago I decided to try my hand on those amazingly good SNOT models were the studs that are seen are kept to a bare minimum. This is what I came out with in the attempt. Wow I can't beileve I forgot to add that this is my first post as a guild member!

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This is the overall picture of the Moc. I am planning on a much more detailed version 3.

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This is just a close up on the apparently well known Blood effect that was originally attempted in a Half Life MOC I beileve.

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Here is my original and very plain attempt.

I think i have many things to fix several of which Rook pointed out to me.

Items on right on ground need to go.

Weirdness on top right seems pointless.

Street lamps need to be more detailed.

Support beam under blue strips is a after thought and should be more permanently Fixed into the Moc.

Constructive criticism is greatly welcomed as I have a lot to be added and fixed.
A toast!


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Post by Green Tee Sun Jul 19, 2009 2:01 am

It's a good MOC, but I think it would be great of you GIMP'd a Corscaunt night background. SNOT is always good.
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Post by Darman Sun Jul 19, 2009 2:37 am

CommanderKill wrote:It's a good MOC, but I think it would be great of you GIMP'd a Corscaunt night background. SNOT is always good.

Thanks for the feedback! Also I like your suggestion of the Corscaunt background. Do you have a reference picture I can use?
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Post by CloneCommandoXion Sun Jul 19, 2009 2:52 am

I like it but it could use some more greebling and detail (both of those are pretty much the same Razz ).
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Post by Darman Sun Jul 19, 2009 2:59 am

CloneCommandoXion wrote:I like it but it could use some more greebling and detail (both of those are pretty much the same Razz ).

I completely agree with you. I am in the process of finding more side studded bricks so I can add more greebles.
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Post by Green Tee Sun Jul 19, 2009 6:45 pm

Darman-C19 wrote:
CommanderKill wrote:It's a good MOC, but I think it would be great of you GIMP'd a Corscaunt night background. SNOT is always good.

Thanks for the feedback! Also I like your suggestion of the Corscaunt background. Do you have a reference picture I can use?

Linky I know it's green screen but ask DP if you could get a full picture of it and GIMP it in.
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Post by Darman Sun Jul 19, 2009 7:04 pm

CommanderKill wrote:
Darman-C19 wrote:
CommanderKill wrote:It's a good MOC, but I think it would be great of you GIMP'd a Corscaunt night background. SNOT is always good.

Thanks for the feedback! Also I like your suggestion of the Corscaunt background. Do you have a reference picture I can use?

Linky I know it's green screen but ask DP if you could get a full picture of it and GIMP it in.

Maybe that's not such a good idea because Me+Green screen= epic failure. Sad
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Post by Clonecommando007 Sun Jul 19, 2009 11:34 pm

You have a nice base level but the random structural supports and the random items sticking out of the bottom and the back detract from this MOC. You'll also want to expand on your wall you've got there.
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Post by Green Tee Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:56 am

I know don't use green screen, ask DP for a picture of that backgroung in full, than GIMP it in.
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Post by Darman Mon Jul 20, 2009 2:07 am

Clonecommando007 wrote:You have a nice base level but the random structural supports and the random items sticking out of the bottom and the back detract from this MOC. You'll also want to expand on your wall you've got there.

Thank you because you just gave me a idea. Since I can't remove the things sticking out of the bottom and wall with 1x1's (I have about 1 of those total Sad ) I will just cover the sides with some plates and add greebles to the side. Annoyingly I am going to have to reconstruct the whole wall and part of the bottom of the Moc. A toast! for the help!
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Post by pdragon27 Mon Jul 20, 2009 2:30 am

Very nice, congrats on getting into the Guild! I told you you'd get in!
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Post by Darman Mon Jul 20, 2009 2:32 am

pdragon27 wrote:Very nice, congrats on getting into the Guild! I told you you'd get in!

Thank you! But I seem not to recall you telling me I would get in. Was it on mibbit?
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