The Clormie Natural De-Evolution

I whipped up this moc last night, basically illustrating the transition from clone to storm trooper, with a lot of symbolism. It's a small bignette. Check it out at the following link

http://mocpages.com/moc.php/58191

The crest of glory slowing disappears.

I like the enemy's in the back.

Cool, looks great! (four,five! )

This is very symbolic, and deserves to be in the jedi temple.

Very good, I like how the enemies of each of them are dead in the bacground.

Thanks I tried to convey the story of the clones, republic, and their enemies as well as possible. I used a lot of symbolism and representation in a short amount of space, while playing around with elevation and landscape. I'm just not 100% sure I clearly wrote about what my statement was meant to be in this moc.