Original 541st Chronicles #9: First One In, Get the Lights
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Original 541st Chronicles #9: First One In, Get the Lights
Yes, not as good as my others, but I'm time starved .
(Yeah, I botched the explosion. I can do fire... but not booms.)
(Yeah, I botched the explosion. I can do fire... but not booms.)
Re: Original 541st Chronicles #9: First One In, Get the Lights
Wow! I definitely like this one more than some of your other ones! Nice job, especially with the tan!
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Re: Original 541st Chronicles #9: First One In, Get the Lights
Agreed, the scenery is really nice! I like the new guy. How 'bout adding in a Jedi soon? I mean, I know they can be boring, but just add one in for a few missions. And a evil general would be great!
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I love the scenery too! All the greebles were awesome! The attention to detail was astounding!
But the hologram could look better...
But the hologram could look better...
Re: Original 541st Chronicles #9: First One In, Get the Lights
Wow sailboats, you've come a long way! The tan bricks in the sfx look great! Good storyline too but I agree, we need a jedi soon! Also the hologram looked a little 2D for my liking, try making it more 3D.
Re: Original 541st Chronicles #9: First One In, Get the Lights
Wowz! This is the best one yet, I might have to use your cargo idea...
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Re: Original 541st Chronicles #9: First One In, Get the Lights
Man I love the awesome snow effect! great job! What kind of camera do you have? I really want to show the story of my legion but my camera is too crappy to take any pics...( thats why I haven't made any topics for the past couple of months to let you all know )
ARC CloneTrooper141- Non-Guild Member
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Re: Original 541st Chronicles #9: First One In, Get the Lights
ARC CloneTrooper141 wrote:Man I love the awesome snow effect! great job! What kind of camera do you have? I really want to show the story of my legion but my camera is too crappy to take any pics...( thats why I haven't made any topics for the past couple of months to let you all know )
Thank you!
It's actually a cheapo-depot Kodak EasyShare C703. It's software sucks, so I just pull out the memory card with my pictures and upload them to me computer from there.
Re: Original 541st Chronicles #9: First One In, Get the Lights
What is that underneath? A towel? It looks great!
Re: Original 541st Chronicles #9: First One In, Get the Lights
Garet6 wrote:What is that underneath? A towel? It looks great!
It would appear to be a quite fluffy, drycleaned towel.
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Re: Original 541st Chronicles #9: First One In, Get the Lights
I'm sure you already noticed your pictures are TOO big...
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
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Re: Original 541st Chronicles #9: First One In, Get the Lights
The scenery is awesome! I like the snow effects too.
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Re: Original 541st Chronicles #9: First One In, Get the Lights
DarthPineapple wrote:I'm sure you already noticed your pictures are TOO big...
Yeah, not much I can do about it... I'm sure you've heard .
Re: Original 541st Chronicles #9: First One In, Get the Lights
I'm glad you worked on caption placing this time. A very nice improvement from your last comics! This is your best one yet!
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