Tatooine Assault-Breaking the Silence
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Tatooine Assault-Breaking the Silence
Story: Regimental Commander Brov and Jedi Master Arth are leading an assault on one of the bases on Tatooine. Using special grappling technology, they infiltrate a base. But, on the way up, it seems they've been spotted...
"General, we've spotted a Jedi climbing Base 4," says OOM-16. "We're no match for a Jedi," a Techno Union officer remarks.
"Hmph, you fools. Have you forgotten about your automated defences,' Grievous sneers. "Sir, we lost them already!" "Blast it... this is of no concern to me... Grievous out."
"Sir! We have a visual!" "What is it," replies OOM-16.
"Sir! Clones!" "What?!?" "Sir, you should get out of here!" "Brov this is 0789, do you copy?" "I copy 89", replies Brov. "I'm halfway there, theyve spotted us as well as Arth. "Damn! So much for a surprise attack..."
"Sir, they're grappling up here!" "Damn it..." says the Techno Union officer. "I'd better get outta here!"
"Lets give em the full power of the Republic," says Arth. "Yessir!"
"This is 89, I'm at the top." "I copy 89."
"All men!" shouts Arth. "Attack!!!"
Bam-bam-bam! Bam-bam!
"T4, access the holo-pros databank! Then upload all records into your memory!" "Beep-beep-bwoop," T4 chirps and beeps.
"Beep-bwoop-boop-beep!" "Beep-bop," T4 chirps. "Good work T4!"
"Come on, move it," Brov orders.
"Hahaha... Those fools... What were they thinking..."
I hope you like it. C&CC welcome!
"General, we've spotted a Jedi climbing Base 4," says OOM-16. "We're no match for a Jedi," a Techno Union officer remarks.
"Hmph, you fools. Have you forgotten about your automated defences,' Grievous sneers. "Sir, we lost them already!" "Blast it... this is of no concern to me... Grievous out."
"Sir! We have a visual!" "What is it," replies OOM-16.
"Sir! Clones!" "What?!?" "Sir, you should get out of here!" "Brov this is 0789, do you copy?" "I copy 89", replies Brov. "I'm halfway there, theyve spotted us as well as Arth. "Damn! So much for a surprise attack..."
"Sir, they're grappling up here!" "Damn it..." says the Techno Union officer. "I'd better get outta here!"
"Lets give em the full power of the Republic," says Arth. "Yessir!"
"This is 89, I'm at the top." "I copy 89."
"All men!" shouts Arth. "Attack!!!"
Bam-bam-bam! Bam-bam!
"T4, access the holo-pros databank! Then upload all records into your memory!" "Beep-beep-bwoop," T4 chirps and beeps.
"Beep-bwoop-boop-beep!" "Beep-bop," T4 chirps. "Good work T4!"
"Come on, move it," Brov orders.
"Hahaha... Those fools... What were they thinking..."
I hope you like it. C&CC welcome!
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Re: Tatooine Assault-Breaking the Silence
Do I like it? HECK yeah! This is great! I love everything about it!!!
astoriabluelegos- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 35
Location : Oregon
Re: Tatooine Assault-Breaking the Silence
Thanks! By the way, the cloaked person at the end is actually a Sith Assassin, more will be revealed about his past and future soon.
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Re: Tatooine Assault-Breaking the Silence
Alpha wrote:Thanks! By the way, the cloaked person at the end is actually a Sith Assassin, more will be revealed about his past and future soon.
Nice, I LOVE stuff like that!
astoriabluelegos- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 35
Location : Oregon
Re: Tatooine Assault-Breaking the Silence
What about making some walls? This is just a plate with some figs on to me, not really a base.
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 30
Location : The Netherlands
Re: Tatooine Assault-Breaking the Silence
I like the assasin, and his purple saber. The story is good, and is well depicted. The Techno Union Worker looks familiar
Re: Tatooine Assault-Breaking the Silence
I like the story but I needs more of a base.
Comrade Faie- Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : Viva La France and Rick Alstley
Re: Tatooine Assault-Breaking the Silence
Yeah it needs more of a base, but its not gettin a wall, as its on the top of a cliff on the roof of a HUMONGOUS (sp?) droid factory.
Maybe I'll make another Version. Lets see...
Maybe I'll make another Version. Lets see...
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Re: Tatooine Assault-Breaking the Silence
Alpha wrote:Thanks! By the way, the cloaked person at the end is actually a Sith Assassin, more will be revealed about his past and future soon.
Oooooo, your sith's story is starting to sound like my clone trooper jedi's story!
(i'll have to post a thread about him and take some pics later )
ARC CloneTrooper141- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 31
Location : PA, USA
Re: Tatooine Assault-Breaking the Silence
ARC CloneTrooper141 wrote:Alpha wrote:Thanks! By the way, the cloaked person at the end is actually a Sith Assassin, more will be revealed about his past and future soon.
Oooooo, your sith's story is starting to sound like my clone trooper jedi's story!
(i'll have to post a thread about him and take some pics later )
Cool! I love the Sith! Anyways, th ethread about the Assassin is up, check it out!
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
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