Thar Assault-Enraged

Story: BOOM! A ROS carrying Arth and his squad is destroyed instantly, after it gets hit. But what hit it? A cyborg Krakar. This Krakar has been modified with a blaster cannon, 2 ferocious claws, and added strength. Will Arth & co get out alive?


"GRAAAWWR!" roars the enraged Krakar as it moves in for the kill. Arth and various other troopers have rolled onto the ground, some alive, most dead. They try to get up before the Krakar finishes them.


Arth stumbles up and jumps infront of the two troopers to protect them. "Get back, and open fire!" Arth commands. Meanwhile, Battle Droids rush in on the scene.


Arth tries to cut the blaster cannon off, but it somehow blocks it. "Damn, this thing has been reinforced with Phrik Alloy!" Arth grunts. The Krakar pulls his arm back and...


swings it on Arth, who is sent flying. Right under him, the poor gunner is shot tryin to escape. Worse, a Hellcrab joins the fight.


Viper and the remaining troopers climb over the the ROS. In confusion, another trooper joins the rest on the ground.


The Hellcrab advances to the unconscious Arth, waiting to strike. Viper realizes he needs to save Arth, or the mission will fail. "Trooper, jump off the ROS, and blast that machine to bits!" Viper commands.


BOOM! The Hellcrab explodes after taking multiple blaster bolts to the photoreceptor. Arth is saved once again by Viper.


After climbing up with great difficulty, the Krakar climbs up and stares down at the three of them. Viper realizes they will have to fight back.


After a couple shots on the head, the Krakar tumbles down, stunned. Arth regains consciousness and asks Viper what happened.


"Well sir, you were knocked out by the monster," replies Viper, not knowing what the hell that cyborg is called. "Those Seps did a pretty good job on it." "Sir, are you complementing the Seps?!?" 5304 asks Viper. "Shut it, trooper. Now lets get the hell outta here." Viper commands. "Yessir!"


Whats left of the squad files out, while Battle Droids try to follow them.


"There they are!" a droid remarks. "Blast them!" "Roger-roger!" "Huh? Ahh!" screams a Battle Droid as something knocks it off.


The Krakar, using repulsorlifts, knocks the Battle Droids and destroys them. It then follows in pursuit of Arth.

I hope you like it! And if you do, vote for Thar Assault in the Beasts of Burden!

I love it!!!The one you did before this was my favorite one(intruder alert!).Nice alpha(first post woot).

Man that's great nice storyline and set!

great MOC and story once again! I'm going to start a new MOC tonight so this might provide some inspiration.

That no-good, low-down, piece of monkey manure "g" isn't working.

Actually, my inspiration was from Legorevs, who is also entering the Beast of Burden. I must say Legorev is #2 after Rook.

I'm liking that hellcrab a lot!

Alpha wrote:Actually, my inspiration was from Legorevs, who is also entering the Beast of Burden. I must say Legorev is #2 after Rook.

And fast aproaching Nmber One. hmm, maybe weshould have different layers of guild, like a advanced guild board. Maybe we already have one . Anyway, this is my favorite build by you Alpha. I, truth be told, find your other builds sorta mass-produced, you know, nothing really outstanding about them. This one however has an epic storyline, as well as a bunch of nice builds.

Yes, that Krakar is a work of art. Atleast in the creators eye.

I really like it! The Krakar is built in such a simple way yet it is so effective! great job Alpha.

Everyone's mocs are better than mine.

Thats because we have experience, you just started, so you shoul dhave good MOCs in no time.

Alpha is still just an okay MOC'er! Just give it time! (At Alpha: )

Yes, I am by no means a good MOCer. I usually spend about 40-60 min on a MOC. (Goes off and works on a high quality MOC)
My next MOC will be small, with details.

I'm kidding, though you need to greeble (as do I...)

I really like the hellcrab droid. Also like usual yuor story is interesting and fun to lead. I can't wait to see what is next.

That's pretty cool. I just love that hellcrab droid, I need to make my own spider droid MOC!