Thar Assault-Lab Infiltration
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Thar Assault-Lab Infiltration
Story: After crossing the bridge with heavy losses, Viper and Arth reach the Seperatist Lab. Upon entry, Viper finds something that will complete Project Hammertong. Little does he know, this will eventually lead to the cause of his death...
"Sir, we have retrieved the crystal." "At last...," sighs Alpha.
Alpha goes over to the control panel, and types in a passcode. The crystal appears in a container. "Ahh, there it is," remarks Alpha
"Finally, after all these months, I have something to present to My Lord."
"Sir, shuttle 2-9-0-4 is ready," informs Unit 54. "Good, tell them to prepare the Hydro-Lift." "Roger-roger."
"Ahh!" "No! The crystal!" "Intruder alert! Call for backup!" OOM-3 commands. But unfortunately, he is the only one left besides Alpha. Bam-bam-bam!
As the 704th storms in, Alpha hopelessly looks around for help. But in the end he surrenders. "Good, now, tell me. What is going on over here?" Arth commands. "We've been testing a power source from the mines deep down! Please have mercy!"
"Very well. You two, take him to ROS-243. Then we'll meet back up at the Demolisher for interrogation." "Yessir!" the two Clones say in unison.
"Sir, we've found some kind of crystal," says Viper. "Hmm... hold on to it, we'll check it after this mess is over."
"Alright move it!" Viper commands.
So how about it eh? 2 MOCs in one day? Hope you like it!
"Sir, we have retrieved the crystal." "At last...," sighs Alpha.
Alpha goes over to the control panel, and types in a passcode. The crystal appears in a container. "Ahh, there it is," remarks Alpha
"Finally, after all these months, I have something to present to My Lord."
"Sir, shuttle 2-9-0-4 is ready," informs Unit 54. "Good, tell them to prepare the Hydro-Lift." "Roger-roger."
"Ahh!" "No! The crystal!" "Intruder alert! Call for backup!" OOM-3 commands. But unfortunately, he is the only one left besides Alpha. Bam-bam-bam!
As the 704th storms in, Alpha hopelessly looks around for help. But in the end he surrenders. "Good, now, tell me. What is going on over here?" Arth commands. "We've been testing a power source from the mines deep down! Please have mercy!"
"Very well. You two, take him to ROS-243. Then we'll meet back up at the Demolisher for interrogation." "Yessir!" the two Clones say in unison.
"Sir, we've found some kind of crystal," says Viper. "Hmm... hold on to it, we'll check it after this mess is over."
"Alright move it!" Viper commands.
So how about it eh? 2 MOCs in one day? Hope you like it!
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Re: har Assault-Lab Infiltration
great job! I love the story line!
Mike- Non-Guild Member
- Location : Eh, Why should I tell you? Stalker...
Re: Thar Assault-Lab Infiltration
Yep good storyline. What I liked the best was how the pass-code enabled the crystal to progress upwards from within that holding tank. That was a nice little add of detail.
Re: Thar Assault-Lab Infiltration
By the way, since this guy is Alpha, he obviously escapes, becuase I would never put my sigfig in custody.
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Re: Thar Assault-Lab Infiltration
legorevolution wrote:Yep good storyline. What I liked the best was how the pass-code enabled the crystal to progress upwards from within that holding tank. That was a nice little add of detail.
I agree with your statement, very cool. I like this one a lot, all the wreckage is cool.
Comrade Faie- Guild Member
- Age : 29
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