Thar Assault-Order 66
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Thar Assault-Order 66
Story: On the ravaged world of Thar, things are going bad for the Republic. Arth and Viper are leading an assault to try to stop a fleet of Spider Droids from reaching the base. On their way, CC-7093 gets a message...
"Come on, move it!" Shouts Viper. "Take Positions behind the Spiders Leg!"
Viper reaches to his helmet Communications System. The voice of the Chancellor comes in and says, "Execute Order 66." "It will be done, My Lord." Viper then speaks into his clone comlink, "This is Viper. Order 66. Someone assist me." "Yessir," says a Clone.
Viper and CT-0934 prepare to shoot Arth. Right then, Arth senses something wrong. "Something wrong, Commander?" "No sir. The only thing wrong... is you."
Arth Tries to deflect a Blast from Viper, but fails and misses. The 2 troopers fire continously at Arth. "AGGHHHH!!!!" Arth screams. Bam-bam-bam-bam!
Bam-bam-bam-bam! Then, seeing Arth's moveless body, he remarks "Well, well, well. So much for a Jedi."
Viper tells the rest of the Clones to fire on the Spider Droid. Viper shoots Arth one last time, though the thought of killing Arth would leave a scar on Viper.
There you have it. By the way, if anyone finds, and tells me all of the crashed vehicles, Ill give em a "prize".
"Come on, move it!" Shouts Viper. "Take Positions behind the Spiders Leg!"
Viper reaches to his helmet Communications System. The voice of the Chancellor comes in and says, "Execute Order 66." "It will be done, My Lord." Viper then speaks into his clone comlink, "This is Viper. Order 66. Someone assist me." "Yessir," says a Clone.
Viper and CT-0934 prepare to shoot Arth. Right then, Arth senses something wrong. "Something wrong, Commander?" "No sir. The only thing wrong... is you."
Arth Tries to deflect a Blast from Viper, but fails and misses. The 2 troopers fire continously at Arth. "AGGHHHH!!!!" Arth screams. Bam-bam-bam-bam!
Bam-bam-bam-bam! Then, seeing Arth's moveless body, he remarks "Well, well, well. So much for a Jedi."
Viper tells the rest of the Clones to fire on the Spider Droid. Viper shoots Arth one last time, though the thought of killing Arth would leave a scar on Viper.
There you have it. By the way, if anyone finds, and tells me all of the crashed vehicles, Ill give em a "prize".
Last edited by Alpha on Thu Jul 31, 2008 2:15 am; edited 2 times in total
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
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Re: Thar Assault-Order 66
ry nice, I love the story behind it! Also, I can see a spider droid, a homing spider droid and a custom turret and walker.
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Lol, I don't know why I laughed but I did. I think it was they kept on shooting him even though he was dead made me laugh. I love all the wreckage! great job!
Comrade Faie- Guild Member
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Garet6 wrote:ry nice, I love the story behind it! Also, I can see a spider droid, a homing spider droid and a custom turret and walker.
Dang, I guess it was too easy Anyways, thanks, I really like this scene too. Too bad though in Ep3, they didn;t show more O66 scenes.
EDIT: Wait you missed it. Can someone guess the last crashed vehicle? Maybe try zooming in
Commander Faie wrote:Lol, I don't know why I laughed but I did. I think it was they kept on shooting him even though he was dead made me laugh. I love all the wreckage! great job!
Look at Wookiepedia. They shot Aayla 55 times
Last edited by Alpha on Sun Jul 27, 2008 4:31 pm; edited 1 time in total
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
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Re: Thar Assault-Order 66
Very nice. It's spelled 'Assault' by the way.
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
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Carnage much? I have to check that out! "Sir my ammo ran out," "then whack her over the head," *whacks her*, *5 hours later*, "I think she died."
Comrade Faie- Guild Member
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Anyways, theres a Crashed STAP, RAG, RAW, HSD, & DSD.
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
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Aki-kundu wrote:Nice work! I like how he mercessly kills the Jedi.
Aki, sometimes I wonder about you... Nice work Alpha! This is a fantastic MOC, and the storyline was excelent! great WORK!!!
astoriabluelegos- VIP Former Staff
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astoriabluelegos wrote:Aki-kundu wrote:Nice work! I like how he mercessly kills the Jedi.
Aki, sometimes I wonder about you... Nice work Alpha! This is a fantastic MOC, and the storyline was excelent! great WORK!!!
No, not that I like the clone killing the Jedi, but I like the fact that he made it so the clone kills the Jedi without mercy.
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Good work Alpha. An entertaining story to go along with a good battle scene. Nice incorperation of the HSD and your own vehicles. What I liked best in this moc was how the new kama and pauldron look good on the phase II troopers. I also like how you put the blaster bolts through his body, and in his leg holes as he was falling. Looks legit.
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I can't believe I didn't see this yet. This is a good bignette, the jedi dying looks legit, as does the wreckage (which is cool).
Uberlag- Non-Guild Member
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Re: Thar Assault-Order 66
I might ocnsider remaking this, as I have much cooler stuff now. By the way, Thar is an anagram of Arth
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
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Alpha wrote:I might ocnsider remaking this, as I have much cooler stuff now. By the way, Thar is an anagram of Arth
Go for it. There's nothing better than seeing improvement. Anagram eh, now we're talking. I always insert little easter eggs, codes, etc into my mocs, names. I like it Alpha.
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That is really good, I like the way you broke part of aspider droid. 5/5
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thunder-clone wrote:That is really good, I like the way you broke part of aspider droid. 5/5
STOP IT RIGHT FREAKING NOW!
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Wow nice setting, i couldn't bring myself to take apart a spider walker though.
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You're kidding right? Stop posting on old threads!TK47 wrote:Wow nice setting, i couldn't bring myself to take apart a spider walker though.
Mike- Non-Guild Member
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Mike888 wrote:You're kidding right? Stop posting on old threads!TK47 wrote:Wow nice setting, i couldn't bring myself to take apart a spider walker though.
Ahh but he didn't bump this one. That was TC. Anyhow, you just posted in this thread didn't you? Now then, if you don't want to add any criticisms or important comments Alpha's 'nettes, than I think that this thread can be left alone. Agreed?
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Mike888 wrote:You're kidding right? Stop posting on old threads!TK47 wrote:Wow nice setting, i couldn't bring myself to take apart a spider walker though.
Are you familiar to the phrase "It's a free country" ?
I don't see why you're getting wound up about people posting on old threads.
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Again? JUST STOP BUMPING OLD TOPICS!
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
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Re: Thar Assault-Order 66
DarthPineapple wrote:Again? JUST STOP BUMPING OLD TOPICS N00BS!
Ok we know he is new and I pm'ed him about the old topics posting.
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